The reading passage and the speaker discussing the about the advantages and the disadvantages of Beavers but in different ways.
Firstly, reading passage says that the Beavers is very helpful the environment, it helps in both ways like storing the water resources for human being as well as it forming field. But the Lecturer argues this point by stating that because of storing of more water it may causes flood and can destroys the forming land.
Secondly, reading passages states that because of the Beavers we can get biodiversity species in this lands like plants and animals. But the professor contrast this point by saying that increase the water level may causes the roots of the trees submerge in water which leads roots to die. That way whole the trees will die in that area and the coverlet under the roads and railways tracks get damages due to the excessive water which may cover these coverlet and damages it.
Thirdly, reading passage suggests that apart from benefit of water resources, it may be helpful in cultivating the fishes and the fishes will reduce the speed of water and it prevents the flood in future when there is more water sources. But the professor argues this point by explaining that the beavers and the dam may leads problem to fishes because they can not move the such strong force of against water and they cannot forward direction which causes damages to the fishes. And moreover sediment which is dirty particles in the water and moreover, it disturb the environmental condition.
Finally, the Beavers will not helps the environmental condition like water resources, farming, biodiversity and cultivation of fishes according the speaker. He totally against the reading passages which states all benefits of Beavers and dam.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aker discussing the about the advantages and the disadvantages of Beavers but in...
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...discussing the about the advantages and the disadvantages of Beavers but in diff...
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Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ge says that the Beavers is very helpful the environment, it helps in both ways l...
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Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
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Suggestion: and
...ing the water resources for human being as well as it forming field. But the Lecturer argu...
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Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'destroy'
Suggestion: destroy
... more water it may causes flood and can destroys the forming land. Secondly, readin...
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Line 6, column 98, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...vers we can get biodiversity species in this lands like plants and animals. But the ...
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Line 6, column 269, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ots of the trees submerge in water which leads roots to die. That way whole the t...
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Line 6, column 341, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...hole the trees will die in that area and the coverlet under the roads and railwa...
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Line 6, column 355, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... will die in that area and the coverlet under the roads and railways tracks get ...
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Line 6, column 431, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...s get damages due to the excessive water which may cover these coverlet and damag...
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Line 6, column 449, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this coverlet' or 'these coverlets'?
Suggestion: this coverlet; these coverlets
...to the excessive water which may cover these coverlet and damages it. Thirdly, reading pas...
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Line 8, column 558, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'disturbs'?
Suggestion: disturbs
...particles in the water and moreover, it disturb the environmental condition. Finally...
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Line 10, column 31, Rule ID: DONT_NEEDS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'help'?
Suggestion: help
...ition. Finally, the Beavers will not helps the environmental condition like water ...
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Line 10, column 31, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...ition. Finally, the Beavers will not helps the environmental condition like water ...
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Line 10, column 244, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...states all benefits of Beavers and dam.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'well', 'apart from', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.279365079365 0.261695866417 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.139682539683 0.158904122519 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.047619047619 0.0723426182421 66% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0380952380952 0.0435111971325 88% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0349206349206 0.0277247811725 126% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126984126984 0.128828473217 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0412698412698 0.0370669169778 111% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.45705631491 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0126984126984 0.0208969081088 61% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.136507936508 0.128158765124 107% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0380952380952 0.0158828679856 240% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0190476190476 0.0114777025283 166% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1794.0 1645.83664459 109% => OK
No of words: 294.0 271.125827815 108% => OK
Chars per words: 6.10204081633 6.08160592843 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.04852973271 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.350340136054 0.374372842146 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.285714285714 0.287516216867 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.159863945578 0.187439937562 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0850340136054 0.113142543107 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45705631491 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 145.348785872 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469387755102 0.539623497131 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.4931515133 53.8517498576 84% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0529801325 84% => OK
Sentence length: 26.7272727273 21.7502111507 123% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4511060205 49.3711431718 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.090909091 132.220823453 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7272727273 21.7502111507 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.36363636364 0.878197800319 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 3.39072847682 442% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 55.2987012987 50.5018328374 109% => OK
Elegance: 2.10447761194 1.90840788429 110% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.549887131256 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.190925959767 0.142949733639 134% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0544654643338 0.0787303798458 69% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.741588065909 0.631733273073 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.116353385975 0.139662658121 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.266732575781 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.103435571967 0% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.502653771369 0.414875509568 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0771549534866 0.0530846634433 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.40443939384 0% => The content is off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0528353158467 0% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.26048565121 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.49668874172 114% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.62251655629 138% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.1766004415 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 9.0 10.2958057395 87% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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