Some people are concerned that children spend too much time on computers-playing games, chatting, and watching videos. But all this time is actually good preparation for children, who will have to spend many hours working on computers throughout their education and their work lives.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Nowadays, computers become popular equipment to spend free time among children. Some people believe that it is really helpful to them in their career while others think that children are overusing the computers and that actually distracts them from other valuable activities. I am totally agree with above statement as overuse of computers really harmful to children in long time.
Some people believe that, nowadays computer education is important because computers are widely used in our daily activities. According to them, there are many career options available for computer professionals and ...
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2015-04-27 | pratik_dkr1 | 94 | view |
- Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities.To what extent do the benefits of this mobility outweigh the disadvantages? 80
- A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?Give reasons for 80
- Some people prefer to be nocturnal during exam days and go through the entire syllabus in the last few days, whereas others have regular habits, studying a little every day.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both studying patterns and choose whic 45
- Team sports are generally promoted as a great way to keep fit and build character However sporting events such as soccer matches are often accompanied by violence between rival supporters and other forms of antisocial behavior If sporting events cause ant 85
- Having different languages makes it difficult for people of different nationalities to communicate with each other It would be better if there was only one language in the world What are the advantage and disadvantages of everyone in the world speaking th 100
I am totally agree with above statement as overuse of computers really harmful to children in long time.
Description: can you re-write this sentence? a lot of errors
because of the excessive use of the computer makes children less social.
because the excessive use of the computer makes children less social.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 284 350
No. of Characters: 1472 1500
No. of Different Words: 159 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.105 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.183 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.576 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 110 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 90 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 71 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 39 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.778 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.494 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.611 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.345 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.563 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.125 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5