The internet has as many disadvantages as it does advantages. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
We live in internet age. During the recent years people have started to use the internet much more. When we look at the society, some people think that the internet could be useful for our lives, while others believe that there might be bad sides. I claim that the internet is beneficial for daily and working life.
On the one hand, there are several advantages of using and having the internet. For one thing, the internet provides ability to do research from your home versus research libraries. For example, when you want to write a scientific article, you need to review the literature, firstly. You should go to library to do that, so it takes plenty of time, but if you do your research on the internet you can save time. Secondly, it supplies platform for products like Skype which allow for holding a video conference with anyone in the world who has access. Last but not least,there are things such as Yahoo Answers and other sites where kids can have help for homework.
On the other hand, it has some disadvantages to have the internet. Initially, in the internet world there are lots of wrong information. Anyone can post anything and much of it is garbage. Accuracy of informations which are located in the internet cannot be controlled. For this reason, people can be confused. Another drawback is the waste of time. When you start surfing on the internet you cannot notice the time that lasts for nothing. Then, you realize far more time has passed than you realized.
Overall, there are many pros and cons of the internet. However, it is clearly seen from the examples that the benefits outnumber the handicaps. I think, the internet has a wide of positive aspects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 570, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'while', 'for example', 'i think', 'such as', 'for one thing', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.220238095238 0.247107548796 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.172619047619 0.15552993741 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0625 0.0946569551029 66% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0625 0.0437536398559 143% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122023809524 0.122223957237 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0327380952381 0.0403219363162 81% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.42857142857 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0208333333333 0.0326786765898 64% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0922619047619 0.0861751148067 107% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0267857142857 0.0214082191602 125% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0238095238095 0.0119246538136 200% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1688.0 1933.38276553 87% => OK
No of words: 294.0 316.052104208 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72203389831 6.10592293882 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20519365927 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.309523809524 0.37474360046 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.231292517007 0.284197041944 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.180272108844 0.203843217982 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0714285714286 0.137313986986 52% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42857142857 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568027210884 0.560935902166 101% => OK
Word variations: 59.9112232167 60.7401812628 99% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0911823647 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.7725350517 67% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1617933639 49.5273876611 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.533333333 93.4120437189 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 15.2821509519 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.06666666667 0.594174754866 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.39078156313 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01102204409 20% => OK
Readability: 37.1292517007 49.1922392462 75% => OK
Elegance: 1.36956521739 1.69127372897 81% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Topic essay coherence: 0.311018597725 0.332604825255 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0899106067773 0.102734651613 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0710979872564 0.0668474354756 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.46400102574 0.534917948617 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.135963897565 0.148666948902 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10616462143 0.13441755203 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576180128312 0.0742828286743 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.404644462638 0.324241079732 125% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0855446095492 0.0640056729886 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203831886906 0.22793763319 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552373000832 0.0582452615562 95% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.41883767535 205% => Too many neutral sentences.
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.88977955912 136% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.60220440882 115% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.00200400802 350% => Too many neutral topic words.
Total topic words: 18.0 10.493987976 172% => OK
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Rates: 75.4175824176 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 7.0 Out of 9