Do you agree or disagree with this statement? It is better to use printed material such as books and articles to get information than it is to use the internet.
ome people believe that it is better to use printed material
such as books and articles . Others would argue that it is more
better to use the Internet. Although a definite decision cannot
be reached easily, in my view, it is better to use Internet.
First, Internet has differet kinds of websites with different
information and sources of up-to-date news. Moreover, it is cheaper.
Most importantly, it is faster.
The first reason that I agree that it is better to use the Internet
is that Internet provides individuals with a veriaty types of information
since they have different kinds of websites from all over the world.
While, books have been writen by an author and there is no chance
for the writer to change the sentences or the context of the book.
Therefore, if the time passes, books remain the same and they cannot be
up-to-date meanwhile every day information on the Interent become
new and fresh by different websites. Companies share new information
with other all over the world and give the chance to everyone
to be informative through surfing the Internet. Furthermore, on the
Interent, people have the opportunity to access to different programs
like cooking, sports, education and so many other subjects. But,
books and articles give specific subjects to their readers.That is
why, it is better foe people to use Internet than printed materials
if they want to be more knowledgable and have information.
Another reason that I agree that it is better to use the Internt is that
it is cheaper than books. Nowadays, technology has progressed widely
. Most countries, both developing and deploved ones, make the best
effort to provide their people with advanced technology by giving them
to their users with the least prices. Users do not have to spend
a lot of money on tehnology such as Internet. People have the ability
to charge their Internt with some affordable amount of money.
It dose not matter if you are rich or poor, it is the least amount
of money which everybody can spend to catch up the latest information
and news. On the other hand, books are expensive because ther are made of
expensive matterials such as paper. Moreover, books need other options
like printing in order to be ready. As a result, the producer of books should
sell their books more expensive to have the ability to make profit and
have enough money so that they can public other books., Besides, with the apearance
of Internet, the vast majority of people no longer use printed materials
.Consequently, more producers do not spent their investments on preparing
books and books become rare and expensive.
Most importantly, Internet is much more faster than books.
When you use Internet, it dose not matter where you are or when
the time is. It is really amazing that you have the chance to
use Internet every where in any time in your office,
at home, in the street while you are walking or even when you are in the bed. You have a totaly
different freedom to use the Internet. In contrast, when you
want to use books, first of all, you should spend a lot of time
going out to find your book. Inaddition, most time you
are not lucky enough to find your book.You should spend a lot of time on
shops to buy your books. Additionally, even if you have your book,
you should spend some valuable time to find your material on that
book specially when the book has a lot of papers.
In summary, whether it is better to use the Internet or printed
materials is a controversial issue; however, the advantages of using Internet
seem to outweigh its disadvantages. First, Internet is one of the most
tremendse sources of news and information. Second, it is cheap and
people do not have to spend a lot of money. Third, Internet is much faster than
books and articles. That is why I agree that we should use Internet
rather than books and materials.
- TPO 24 Integrated Writing Task 73
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- Tpo 20 90
- TPO-31 - Integrated Writing Task 79
Comments
Essay evaluation report
Sentence: ome people believe that it is better to use printed material such as books and articles .
Error: ome Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: First, Internet has differet kinds of websites with different information and sources of up-to-date news.
Error: differet Suggestion: different
Sentence: The first reason that I agree that it is better to use the Internet is that Internet provides individuals with a veriaty types of information since they have different kinds of websites from all over the world.
Error: veriaty Suggestion: verify
Sentence: While, books have been writen by an author and there is no chance for the writer to change the sentences or the context of the book.
Error: writen Suggestion: write
Sentence: But, books and articles give specific subjects to their readers.That is why, it is better foe people to use Internet than printed materials if they want to be more knowledgable and have information.
Error: knowledgable Suggestion: knowledgeable
Sentence: Most countries, both developing and deploved ones, make the best effort to provide their people with advanced technology by giving them to their users with the least prices.
Error: deploved Suggestion: deployed
Sentence: Users do not have to spend a lot of money on tehnology such as Internet.
Error: tehnology Suggestion: technology
Sentence: On the other hand, books are expensive because ther are made of expensive matterials such as paper.
Error: matterials Suggestion: materials
Error: ther Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: As a result, the producer of books should sell their books more expensive to have the ability to make profit and have enough money so that they can public other books., Besides, with the apearance of Internet, the vast majority of people no longer use printed materials .Consequently, more producers do not spent their investments on preparing books and books become rare and expensive.
Error: apearance Suggestion: appearance
Sentence: You have a totaly different freedom to use the Internet.
Error: totaly Suggestion: total
Sentence: First, Internet is one of the most tremendse sources of news and information.
Error: tremendse Suggestion: trends
flaws:
No. of Words: 673 350 //Write the essay in 30 minutes. Don't need to put reasons at introduction paragraph or conclusion paragraph.
No. of Spelling Errors: 12 2 //Double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Paragraphs: 58.0 4.5376344086 1278% => Seems you used a text editor and it doesn't return properly.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 22 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 12 2
No. of Sentences: 33 15
No. of Words: 673 350
No. of Characters: 3085 1500
No. of Different Words: 256 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 5.093 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.584 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.44 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 199 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 135 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 104 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 55 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.394 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.755 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.636 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.317 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.478 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.197 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Ome
ome people believe that it is better to use...
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Line 2, column 27, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ted material such as books and articles . Others would argue that it is more be...
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Line 2, column 60, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...rticles . Others would argue that it is more better to use the Internet. Although a definit...
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Line 2, column 64, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...les . Others would argue that it is more better to use the Internet. Although a d...
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Line 5, column 62, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ifferet kinds of websites with different information and sources of up-to-date ne...
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Line 14, column 72, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...books remain the same and they cannot be up-to-date meanwhile every day informati...
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Line 18, column 68, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...urfing the Internet. Furthermore, on the Interent, people have the opportunity to...
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Line 21, column 60, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: That
...give specific subjects to their readers.That is why, it is better foe people to us...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ecific subjects to their readers.That is why, it is better foe people to use Inte...
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Line 26, column 70, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...adays, technology has progressed widely . Most countries, both developing and dep...
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Line 27, column 67, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eloping and deploved ones, make the best effort to provide their people with adva...
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Line 29, column 65, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...least prices. Users do not have to spend a lot of money on tehnology such as Inte...
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Line 32, column 4, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'doses'?
Suggestion: doses
...th some affordable amount of money. It dose not matter if you are rich or poor, it ...
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Line 39, column 74, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... people no longer use printed materials .Consequently, more producers do not spen...
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Line 40, column 2, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Consequently
...eople no longer use printed materials .Consequently, more producers do not spent their inve...
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Line 43, column 36, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'faster' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: faster
.... Most importantly, Internet is much more faster than books. When you use Internet, it ...
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Line 44, column 27, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'doses'?
Suggestion: doses
... than books. When you use Internet, it dose not matter where you are or when the ...
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Line 44, column 64, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...it dose not matter where you are or when the time is. It is really amazing that y...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ally amazing that you have the chance to use Internet every where in any time in ...
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Line 46, column 14, Rule ID: EVERY_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'everywhere'?
Suggestion: everywhere
...t you have the chance to use Internet every where in any time in your office, at home, i...
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Line 48, column 61, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... use the Internet. In contrast, when you want to use books, first of all, you sho...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t of all, you should spend a lot of time going out to find your book. Inaddition,...
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Line 51, column 40, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: You
... are not lucky enough to find your book.You should spend a lot of time on shops t...
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Line 51, column 73, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...r book.You should spend a lot of time on shops to buy your books. Additionally, e...
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Line 52, column 67, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...dditionally, even if you have your book, you should spend some valuable time to f...
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Line 53, column 66, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uable time to find your material on that book specially when the book has a lot o...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is better to use the Internet or printed materials is a controversial issue; howe...
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Line 58, column 1, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Internet) must be used with a third-person verb: 'seems'.
Suggestion: seems
...ever, the advantages of using Internet seem to outweigh its disadvantages. First, I...
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Line 59, column 67, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and information. Second, it is cheap and people do not have to spend a lot of mon...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... why I agree that we should use Internet rather than books and materials. ...
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Line 62, column 34, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rnet rather than books and materials.
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'really', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'third', 'while', 'in contrast', 'in summary', 'such as', 'as a result', 'first of all', 'in my view', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.227576974565 0.229887763892 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.161981258367 0.158761421928 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0816599732262 0.0866891130778 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0642570281124 0.046263068375 139% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0669344042838 0.0685040099705 98% => OK
Prepositions: 0.113788487282 0.118717715034 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0240963855422 0.0351676179071 69% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.57585369658 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.041499330656 0.0309702414327 134% => OK
Particles: 0.00133868808568 0.00188951952338 71% => OK
Determiners: 0.0803212851406 0.0887237588012 91% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0133868808568 0.0209618222197 64% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0133868808568 0.0139019557991 96% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3932.0 2387.08602151 165% => OK
No of words: 673.0 408.028673835 165% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.84249628529 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.09335287823 4.48200974243 114% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.319465081724 0.338922669872 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.216939078752 0.251872472559 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.164933135215 0.174417080927 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.105497771174 0.112833075102 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57585369658 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.39970282318 0.524397521467 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 49.4235005824 59.2087087015 83% => OK
How many sentences: 33.0 20.6684587814 160% => OK
Sentence length: 20.3939393939 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.4300686681 48.84282405 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.151515152 120.699889404 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3939393939 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.636363636364 0.644075263715 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 58.0 4.5376344086 1278% => There are something wrong with the essay format.
Language errors: 31.0 5.54480286738 559% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 42.0878472691 45.7405998639 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.24657534247 1.45489161554 86% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.574721953146 0.300154397459 191% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.168286226967 0.103427244359 163% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.126360985305 0.0752933317313 168% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.784735656502 0.497263757937 158% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.238984681064 0.151897553556 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.219680069178 0.114077575197 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108503833876 0.0781384742642 139% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.10433107787 0.336927656856 31% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.080821704052 0.067059652881 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167008960024 0.210909579961 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101895142214 0.0618886996521 165% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8870967742 193% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 19.0 8.42114695341 226% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 26.0 13.6433691756 191% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Less content wanted. Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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