If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable.
The statement mentioned above seems partially justified and matches with my personal opinion while I would like to disagree on the extent of means that are referred to here. I believe that goal setting is one most important aspect of ever-competent human being and its fulfilment gives immense inner satisfaction and motivates to achieve further. But it does not mean that one can use any immoral means and justify them as appropriate.
When we use negative or forbidden means to achieve something, it might give us short term applause while it might lead to darkness forever when exposed. Like in this case where, some athletes winning gold medals in Olympics and setting world record with immense appreciation all over the world are later found duping steroids and stimulants while performing, are not only snatched of their medals but also their entire career gets spoiled. This also hurts sentiments of the nation they belong to as well as sports loving community.
Way is as important as destination, We can take the instance of fight of people for freedom or rights. Indian struggle for freedom is such example where people used non-violence and largely succeeded in that without losing much lives of their own brothers while in other fights we can see people have killed masses over a small piece of land.
The same can be taken in case of a research also, where a scientist only in order to publish in a number one journal or to attain popularity; forges the data and shows some improbable results then he might get caught when people try to replicate his findings. In such cases also the short term success might lead into a blackened future.
It is believed in philosophy that like attracts like. The honest, genuine and constructive efforts will generate the long living positive outcomes and we can go any means in this direction to achieve what our heart wants.
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- Claim: In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years.Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership.Write a response in which you discuss the ext 58
- If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable. 16
- Teachers' salaries should be based on the academic performance of their students. 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...partially justified and matches with my personal opinion while I would like to disagree on the e...
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Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...argely succeeded in that without losing much lives of their own brothers while in ot...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'while', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.227810650888 0.240241500013 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.174556213018 0.157235817809 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.094674556213 0.0880659088768 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0532544378698 0.0497285424764 107% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0621301775148 0.0444667217837 140% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.121301775148 0.12292977631 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0502958579882 0.0406280797675 124% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.5283370585 2.79330140395 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0295857988166 0.030933414821 96% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0710059171598 0.0997080785238 71% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0325443786982 0.0249443105267 130% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0236686390533 0.0148568991511 159% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1879.0 2732.02544248 69% => OK
No of words: 319.0 452.878318584 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.89028213166 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.58838876751 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.33855799373 0.366273622748 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.25078369906 0.280924506359 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.163009404389 0.200843997647 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0940438871473 0.132149295362 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5283370585 2.79330140395 91% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 219.290929204 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.48968727796 127% => OK
Word variations: 72.5356512243 55.4138127331 131% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6194690265 58% => OK
Sentence length: 26.5833333333 23.380412469 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.9110474025 59.4972553346 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.583333333 141.124799967 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5833333333 23.380412469 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.674092028746 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 51.6617032393 51.4728631049 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.37755102041 1.64882698954 84% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18216682283 0.391690518653 47% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.107219108514 0.123202303941 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.069385751204 0.077325440228 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.598233767071 0.547984918172 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.158406316617 0.149214159877 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725764607836 0.161403998019 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439335196431 0.0892212321368 49% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.193750606329 0.385218514788 50% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.031753296538 0.0692045440612 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106921647463 0.275328986314 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446368612605 0.0653680567796 68% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 11.0 13.5995575221 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.