Some people feel lonely living in the high-rise apartment blocks, while others prefer this kind of living. Give your opinion and examples from your own experience.
Choices of dwelling keep changing since the evolution period of the humanbeing. As people grow, many social and emotional aspects affect the individual choice of living space. Many adepts assert that some people feel lonely living in the high-rise apartments while others prefer this kind of living. It is a highly debated topic which divides the opinions. However, In the following essay, I would like to discuss the factors associated with this trend.
To commence with, In today's fast paced life, people get very restricted personal time which they would like to spend in enjoyment or rejuvenate. The routine maintenance of big houses gulps both time and money of the family members. Living in high-rise apartment can reduce the efforts and save the money required for routine cleaning and other maintenance due to reduced area. Moreover, high-rise apartments offer the diversity of the dwellers in the block. It will not only provide an opportunity to connect with people of the different community but also develop the tolerance and adaptability of the people to develop strong social values in the society.
Furthermore, living space also plays a vital role in the psychology of the people. Living in high-rise building can boost the confidence and selfesteem in the residents. In addition, Many people prefer to live in the high privacy with the moderate occassional socialism which is the one of the benefit of living in apartments. Apart from all the above, nuclear and small family is the trend of today's generation which motivates them to live in aparments.
On the flipside, In many countries like India, there is a trend of joint family where elders like to live in the hustle and bustle of the family memebers.Not only that, elderaly people feel lonely due to the availability of spare time which they can not spend in the concept of high-rise apartment. Finally, oldage people like to socialise more during their sedentary life while in high-rise apartment people do not like to indulge much in other's life.
All in all, society is the mixture of different kind of people who have different priorities in their life. In my view, there is no harm to live in residence of one's own set of mind, and this differentiation gives a unique balance of infrastructure in the cities.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: In addition, Many people prefer to live in the high privacy with the moderate occassional socialism which is the one of the benefit of living in apartments.
Error: occassional Suggestion: occasional
Sentence: Apart from all the above, nuclear and small family is the trend of today's generation which motivates them to live in aparments.
Error: aparments Suggestion: apartments
Sentence: On the flipside, In many countries like India, there is a trend of joint family where elders like to live in the hustle and bustle of the family memebers.Not only that, elderaly people feel lonely due to the availability of spare time which they can not spend in the concept of high-rise apartment.
Error: elderaly Suggestion: elderly
Error: memebers Suggestion: members
Error: high-rise Suggestion: high rise
Error: flipside Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Finally, oldage people like to socialise more during their sedentary life while in high-rise apartment people do not like to indulge much in other's life.
Error: oldage Suggestion: ?
flaws:
The forth paragraph is off the topic. Better to develop 4 paragraphs in your future essays. and read the topic carefully:
paragraph 1: introduction
paragraph 2: Some people feel lonely living in the high-rise apartment blocks, //people feel lonely because of communications, ages, jobs...
paragraph 3: while others prefer this kind of living. //maybe young people like it, more facilities like gym...
paragraph 4: Give your opinion and examples from your own experience. //I like/dislike high-rise apartment, because....
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Write the essay according to the topic. It is the time to forget the pattern we gave you before. Need to have your own writing style in order to get 8.0 or over.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 7 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 383 350
No. of Characters: 1871 1500
No. of Different Words: 197 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.424 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.885 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.59 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 139 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 93 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 64 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 49 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.278 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.164 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.556 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.34 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.551 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.124 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...people. Living in high-rise building can boost the confidence and selfesteem in t...
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Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...elfesteem in the residents. In addition, Many people prefer to live in the high p...
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Line 7, column 155, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Not
...ustle and bustle of the family memebers.Not only that, elderaly people feel lonely ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'apart from', 'in addition', 'kind of', 'in my view']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.262019230769 0.247107183377 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.122596153846 0.155533422707 79% => OK
Adjectives: 0.100961538462 0.0946595960268 107% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0456730769231 0.0501214627716 91% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0216346153846 0.0437548338989 49% => OK
Prepositions: 0.153846153846 0.122226691241 126% => OK
Participles: 0.0216346153846 0.0403226058552 54% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.67127068452 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.03125 0.0326793684256 96% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.115384615385 0.0861772015684 134% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0144230769231 0.021408717616 67% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0168269230769 0.011925033212 141% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2310.0 1933.35771543 119% => OK
No of words: 382.0 316.048096192 121% => OK
Chars per words: 6.04712041885 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20517956788 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.379581151832 0.374742101984 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.243455497382 0.28420135186 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.178010471204 0.203846283523 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.141361256545 0.137316102897 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67127068452 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.037074148 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526178010471 0.56093040696 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 57.9712165336 60.7387585426 95% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.2222222222 20.7743622355 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4568289442 49.517814964 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.333333333 127.492653851 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 20.7743622355 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.777777777778 0.814263465372 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 45.5677719604 49.1944974215 93% => OK
Elegance: 2.30379746835 1.69124875643 136% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378556116599 0.332605444948 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.154535268811 0.102741220458 150% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0766899343626 0.0668466124924 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.616118480063 0.534860350844 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.143076659895 0.148594505496 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17689051982 0.134430193775 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101501812046 0.0742795772207 137% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.512864257176 0.324371583561 158% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0846405355322 0.0638462369009 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27401185418 0.228012699653 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589765381709 0.058150111329 101% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.90881763527 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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