Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
First of all, I would like to say men and women besides their inherent physical differences, they should walk together, because they have equal rights to live in the world, along with the men or the animals.
Nowadays, we can see that many women are taking steps together in many achievements , which may be in the businesses, teachings, marketing, IT sectors, and even in the aeronautical. We Indians knew the Kalpana Chawala, the first Indian born astronaut who gets an honor to be the first Indian lady to get in the space. But, unfortunately, her spaceship did not land on the Earth safely, she lost her live the accident. However, many women came forward to become astronaut, one of them were Sunita Williams. We Indian also know the great Sudha Murthy, who is the first India women who gets to work in one of the largest auto manufactures Tata Engineering and locomotive company. These examples states that the women have made same opportunities in the every fields as men, which is great part.
Even though the above examples are true, in some parts of the India people gives women the secondary important. They do not want to teach their girls, instead they asks them to cook every day's meal. They suffer because everyone thinks about their inherent physical differences, which in turns they are not equally suited for many tasks. Therefore, the Indian government teaches the girls free of cost, so that no one thinks that education of the girls is costly. government also organizes some programs to make the women stronger.
After all I think women should treat same as the men, besides their inherent physical differences. But, we should make steps to make them even stronger.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...king steps together in many achievements , which may be in the businesses, teachin...
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Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'ask'
Suggestion: ask
...want to teach their girls, instead they asks them to cook every days meal. They suff...
^^^^
Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...s, instead they asks them to cook every days meal. They suffer because everyone thin...
^^^^
Line 5, column 464, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Government
... that education of the girls is costly. government also organizes some programs to make th...
^^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'after all', 'i think', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.214067278287 0.240241500013 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.149847094801 0.157235817809 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.103975535168 0.0880659088768 118% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0519877675841 0.0497285424764 105% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0672782874618 0.0444667217837 151% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.100917431193 0.12292977631 82% => OK
Participles: 0.0122324159021 0.0406280797675 30% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.50904900784 2.79330140395 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0305810397554 0.030933414821 99% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.100917431193 0.0997080785238 101% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0183486238532 0.0249443105267 74% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0183486238532 0.0148568991511 124% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1694.0 2732.02544248 62% => OK
No of words: 289.0 452.878318584 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8615916955 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.58838876751 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.283737024221 0.366273622748 77% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.204152249135 0.280924506359 73% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.155709342561 0.200843997647 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.100346020761 0.132149295362 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50904900784 2.79330140395 90% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 219.290929204 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56401384083 0.48968727796 115% => OK
Word variations: 58.855000168 55.4138127331 106% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6194690265 68% => OK
Sentence length: 20.6428571429 23.380412469 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9569750471 59.4972553346 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 141.124799967 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 23.380412469 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.928571428571 0.674092028746 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 41.0580820564 51.4728631049 80% => OK
Elegance: 1.21590909091 1.64882698954 74% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253355152453 0.391690518653 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.100570265274 0.123202303941 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.065511676924 0.077325440228 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.537669491532 0.547984918172 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.178013055749 0.149214159877 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110023264868 0.161403998019 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12085158776 0.0892212321368 135% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.327014209739 0.385218514788 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0956624863649 0.0692045440612 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190194896168 0.275328986314 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617784779154 0.0653680567796 95% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.5995575221 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.