The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.

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The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.

Although some people think traveling in a group that led by tour guide can make a lot of problems, I think it is one of the best ways for traveling, because of some reasons that I will mention.
Firstly, traveling in a group and getting a tour guide can be economical. Originally, every city has a unique restaurant, shopping centers that are cheap and their food or good is really valuable, but just a person who knows them well that being familiar with the city. So, if travelers have a tour guide that knows the city well, he/she can assist them to see and buy a lot of things besides they can save their money, too. So, the tour guide is a good choice if travelers want to travel to unfamiliar cities and save their money.
In addition, a trip may be a disaster, if they travel with a group and without a tour guide. Every group needs a person who can manage memberships and prevent a conflict. A Tour guide’s main role is, acting like a leader who builds an organized group. Surely, traveling by this group can be a memorable and an unforgettable trip. So, the tour guide role in a traveling by a group is administering memberships to inhibit from differences in the group.
Finally, this trip can be informative. When a person travels in a group, he/she sees a variety of characteristic by unlike people. This trip instructs them about social manner; how they behave with people in a good way. Also, the person can learn useful information from them that increase their knowledge and experience that help them to improve their skills in behaving with people. However, the person can travel alone, and maybe she/he has a convenient trip with the lesser problem, but her/his does not benefit from a trip as a traveling group. So, the traveling in a group is an excellent chance to get the beneficial thing that can ease their lives.
In conclusion, traveling in a group that led by a tour guide have a lot of advantage such as save money, becoming a sociable person, and preventing from a disagreement between memberships.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, really, so, well, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62983425414 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68755996055 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477900552486 0.524837075471 91% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.937711799 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5882352941 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2941176471 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367399859021 0.236089414692 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135496878632 0.076458572812 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950221966132 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22567818295 0.150856017488 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703292464784 0.0645574589148 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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