Environment pollution is too alarming to be managed by individuals Real change can be made at the government level What extent do you agree or disagree

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Environment pollution is too alarming to be managed by individuals. Real change can be made at the government level. What extent do you agree or disagree.

Today, environment pollution is the major problem for government and individual. It should be supported by government level rathar than only pubic level in order to spread real changes. I am totally agree with the above statement and I will discuss about the government options on this in detail.

First, every person do not have sufficient time and effort to manage and focus on environment completely. Therefore, if government supports such campaign then with joint efforts from both, we can easily and speedly spread fruits to grass root level. For example, Government of India created campaign of Clean India through which it provides funds to NGOs so that they can work easily. So, government's help play vital role to maintain clean environment.

Secondly, Government is the main body who is the responsible for policy and rules. Thus, if government implement some strict measurement on environment pollution then citizens can be prevented from wrong usage of natural resources. For instance, most of the nations today have environment department that is dedicately working to control environmental pollution. Therefore, Government measurements can restrict citizens from disturbing environement.

In conclusion, preserving environment to its clean state is quite complex task and citizens and government have to work together to tackle this problem.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 142, Rule ID: PUBIC_X[1]
Message: Did you mean 'public'?
Suggestion: public
...ed by government level rathar than only pubic level in order to spread real changes. ...
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Line 1, column 200, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...er to spread real changes. I am totally agree with the above statement and I will dis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 5.75862068966 417% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1157.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 208.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5625 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96128479808 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9973957122 50.4703680194 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.4166666667 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236902043788 0.242375264174 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850930029457 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524280717144 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138489562722 0.151781067708 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611743747228 0.0609392437508 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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