Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
When it comes to the question whether people are more happier and satisfied with their lives than people in the past, everyone will have their own answer given their individual characteristics, personal accomplishments and society that they live. From my perspective, people are more happier than past because they have equal opportunity to have better financial situation, they have higher hygiene and they use technology to cover make life easier. I will detail my reasoning as follows.
First, nowadays people have more fair opportunities to earn more money if they work hard and plan very well. In the past, society was categorized based on individual's family condition which allows limited number of person access to everything and the governing system made a situation that others, work class families, were unable to use such facilities. For instance, higher education were exclusive to rich people and middle class families could not afford university or even high school expenditures while everybody can get a loan and continue his/her education at university. So, individual who study hard in school and university will have better job offers by high paid corporations. Therefore, as financial problem is root of many problems, people can be happier because they can spend much money in entertainment, traveling, education which they would not able to afford them.
Second, people are healthier than past due to better accessibility to healthy foods and equipment. In the past, our antecedents lost many of their families because of lower level of hygiene. Now, people can use only vegetables and organic foods in order to have a healthier life. In addition, if they suffer from a disease, they visit knowledgeable doctors who can their sickness by employing advances equipment and methods. As we know, the healthier people, the more happier. Hence, by increasing rate of hygiene among individuals, our society would be more cheerful and people would enjoy their personal and social life.
Third and last, technology has changed our world such that people use it to feel happy. For instance, if you live in another city and miss your family or friends, you can have video call through internet with them. Also, you can join online game groups and play computer games like soccer with other countries. Furthermore, you can access to a large archive of movies and series and watch them whenever and wherever you want. In sum, in this borderless world, there are many things that triggers you to be happy whereas none of these equipment and facilities were exist in past.
In conclusion, despite the fact that people are less happier than past, I strongly believe that we are at the top notch of world's history of prosperity and justice. So, there is not a reason to regret about past. In total, past has gone and nobody can not reach it again; If you want to be happy, just focus on beautiful future and positive aspects of it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "the question"?
Suggestion: whether
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Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
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Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
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Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
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Suggestion: less happy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, if, second, so, therefore, third, well, whereas, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2461.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 487.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05338809035 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69766713281 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63673101276 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548254620123 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 772.2 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2716292425 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.863636364 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1363636364 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86363636364 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284370128504 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806511833072 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571990694856 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160601948923 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466506092255 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.