Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people passionately believe in the pivotal role of luck in their path to success. However, I personally think that it is a fairly biased opinion as there are more crucial factors that contribute to the achievement of an individual.
In the first place, industry and determination are considered as two of the leading keys to one's success. Working hard in conjunction with will power enables people to devote their time and effort to finding out the answers to problems, which can be seen in many celebrities of various fields. For instance, Apple CEO Tim Cook has always been a prime example for a workaholic who begins to email employees at 4.30 in the morning. He spent most of his 24 hours in the office working on ideas and plans to make Apple more and more prosperous. Another clear case is Nick Vujicic, an Australian motivational speaker who unfortunately suffered from a rare disorder, Despite the absence of four limbs, he still exerts himself to live and study with a positive mind and finally managed to earn a bachelor degree with a double major in accountancy and financial planning. These two great man set a good example for those achieving success by their own attempts.
On the other hand, luck is just a small factor leading to one's achievement. Firstly, people cannot solely be dependent on luck to fulfill their aims. For instance, students who hope to be lucky in the exams and do not revise carefully stand a slim chance of receiving a satisfactory result. Secondly, luck only contributes to short-term fortune. People may be lucky occasionally, which is exemplified by winning lottery or buying a good bargain. However, luck just comes once in a lifetime. Relying purely on it without one's effort to work is likely to result in bitter disappointment.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that people must be extremely determined and industrious in order to pursue their passion till the end.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, in conclusion, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91692307692 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82583181449 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624615384615 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7085343086 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.875 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9375 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107872700232 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372549215987 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314790762374 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0665433367443 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252457744823 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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