As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilites. Do you agree or disagree?
The idea that besides making money, enterprises should also accept social responsibilities remains a source of controversy. From my standpoint, I am convinced that in addition to the attempt of maximizing their profits, businesses should run their companies in a socially responsible manner.
On the one hand, it is obvious that enterprises put the aim of earning profits on the top priority for the sake of individuals and community as a whole. In order to survive in a competitive world, they exert themselves to earn money to cover running costs namely employees' wages and payments for equipments and buildings. What is more, by generating profits from commercial activities, businesses act as a supplier of national budget with a large amount of tax. These sources of revenue can be allocated for key fields such as infrastructure improvements and education initiatives. Furthermore, businesses with good financial health tend to expand scales of production and set up new branches, which offers a considerable number of job opportunities; thus it makes a contribution to solve unemployment problem.
On the other hand, while conducting business is of great importance to enterprises, they need to take their social obligations into consideration. Firstly, production processes must not lead to environmental degradation which has been at the top of public concern in the industrial age. The cases of global warming stemming from factory emissions and irresponsible disposal of untreated wastes have rung an alarm bell in human awareness of environmental protection. Secondly, businesses which make huge profits should put money back to the needy in our community through philanthropic activities and charitable donations. Unilever and Google are two prime examples of generous companies which enhance their public image by holding many charity campaigns and financial scholarships for different social purposes.
In a nutshell, that businesses have sought to make profits is a fundamental principle of economics which all entrepreneurs attempt to achieve. However, they should also profoundly reflect upon their social responsibilities as a way to contribute to a flourishing society.
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- Entrance exam into universities has been used in a number of countries But while it may offer several advantages some people say that it should be abolished and replaced by another way of selecting students To what extent do you agree or disagree 90
- Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 89
- As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilites. Do you agree or disagree? 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, in addition, such as, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1862.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59159159159 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32689907371 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633633633634 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.2164556128 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 133.0 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7857142857 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187216948623 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623604931914 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053610588651 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126114616097 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423014742879 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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