Illiterate parents cannot teach their children well, a laborer’s child cannot become a doctor, what are your views regarding this.
Uneducated parents cannot provide efficient education and skills to their offsprings; apropos of this statement I am in consummately discord with it as I feel they value education ever more as compared to others because they have encountered with the lack of it.
Fruitful education always require attitude, etiquettes, determination and objective oriented approaches which can be achieved by effective upbringing by parents, no matters illiterate or literate. Parents with low qualification level may struggle with the selection of appropriate field in study but this can be tackled by efficient guidance from teachers.
Literacy level of parents is never been a hindrance in success of many famous accomplished people such as Abraham Lincoln; violent staccatos of the jackhammer coupled with rhythmic pounding of nails and muffled obscenities comprise the symphony of the construction site that has been his father’s accompaniment for years and Lincoln saw the value of education in the scratches and calluses in his hands and aches in his knees which fortify his notion of uphill struggle.
In short, for every individual, children’s education is of paramount significance which he always tries to support irrespective of financial conditions or other obstacles.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...s I feel they value education ever more as compared to others because they have en...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, i feel, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 193.0 242.827586207 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66839378238 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19526583416 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678756476684 0.580463131201 117% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6551724138 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.5024630542 185% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.083762861 50.4703680194 230% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 218.8 104.977214359 208% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 38.6 20.9669160288 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.25397266985 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104906043935 0.242375264174 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528399473676 0.0925447433944 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286418245472 0.071462118173 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0601352315425 0.151781067708 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279581000215 0.0609392437508 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.6 12.6369458128 195% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 15.99 53.1260098522 30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.54236453202 223% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 10.9458128079 187% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.2 11.5310837438 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.49 8.32886699507 138% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.3980295567 165% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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