Essay topics: In the past, most people lived in small villages, where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays, most people live in large cities where they only knew a few people in their area. What do you think were the advantages and the disadvantages of living in small community?
The majority of people lived in the countryside where they were born in the past. However, habitats are leaving the villages to work in the downtown where everyone only knows a few people else. While there are benefits to stay at small villages, there are also bad reasons affect on members of a family.
On the one hand, living in the countryside is beneficial in some ways. Firstly, children can be looked after by the elderly people. Therefore, they grew up being polite. Secondly, they also play with many pupils who have nearly the same old as. Thirdly, when people lived in this places, they would be supported by neighbors around, especially anyone has to problems. Besides, a crime rate also significant decrease thank for the relationship among homes. There are the fourth benefits.
On the other hand, there are a lot of trouble if they choose a small town to accommodate. One of the concerns is school and hospital were in the next village or in the town some miles away. It is difficult for them to receive the high-quality education and more entertainments. Moreover, the young people who have the ambition about the happy life, leaving parents and villages to find a chance exchange a job with the high salary.
In conclusion, it seems evident that people lived in small villages has many advantages, It makes them happier and more peaceful. But they have to deal with the difficult problems what happened when they lived in that.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, while, as to, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81526104418 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5531621171 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590361445783 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0782781859 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9375 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5625 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256755890089 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764188737257 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913937286611 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168403629847 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109937161947 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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