Some people think that child's success in adult life depends on the way their parents brought them up . do you agree or disagree.
Every parent wants their children to do better in future and live well and understands how important it is for child to be successful. Some people believe that child’s future depends on the nurturing done by the parent and I also assert this view. I shall explain the reasons in essay.
Despite the troubled childhood, there are many people in the world who made their career and became successful. There could be various reasons behind this. Firstly, sometime parent are not able to give the expected attention to their kids but other family members make up instead of the parent and provide required guidance. Particularly, Grandparents fill the gap created by the lack of attention from parent. For instance, former Indian caption Gurjeet’s parent were drug addict and gave no support in the childhood, however, his grandparents took care of him completely and showed the right way which proved to be the strong foundation in his long career. Secondly, few individuals are so determined that they remain focused in adverse condition and sail through and achieve their goal.
But most of us rely on the parents during childhood and their up-bringing and moral teaching help us to achieve in the life. Parents not only teach the books but also give the confidence and insight to fight the challenges comes in the way. For instance, my father always look-up to their parents when he needs any advice related to business or major decision in life. Furthermore, parents know their wards best and mentor the kids based on the customized solution and later in the life, kids get benefit while pursuing their goal. Also, parents make the kids ready for the upcoming difficult situations since childhood so that children should not feel stressed in those conditions.
To recapitulate, parent’s advice and upbringing gives immense strength and confidence in fighting the day to day challenges. Though some people achieve their goal without much parent guidance but most of us learn a lot from our parents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 469, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
...er Indian caption Gurjeet's parent were drug addict and gave no support in the ...
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Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'challenges'' or 'challenge's'?
Suggestion: challenges'; challenge's
...the confidence and insight to fight the challenges comes in the way. For instance, my fath...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0813253012 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64683981302 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60843373494 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9070959645 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.4375 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268292962464 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822514520516 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569629443255 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167095810638 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366943752569 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.