Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.
Throughout history, in all civilized societies, selecting a job engendered copious controversies among people. Some people may hold the view that it is necessary to select a secure job. However, some other may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that people should wait and choose a appealing job. As far as I am concerned, people should take a satisfynig job because not only can they enjoy their life, but also they can progress in their life.
The first reason worth mentioning is that people can enjoy their life by choosing a pleasing. Nowadays every person needs to enjoying his life because life moving very fast and it is boring. Moreover, a person who choose a job that he likes, spend all his time in his work to finish it without any mistake. it is proven that if a person do not like his job, he tries to do it very fast and this leads to error and fatal in the job. So, by taking a satisfying job you make a right decision in your life. Also, when a person performs a job that likes, it gives her energy to work harder. For example, a person that are responsible for a job that he likes, try really hard to finish it correctly and never get tired. after finishing his work when he arrives home, still have a lot energy.
A further more subtle point is that it helps people to make progress in their life. With advancement in the technology, become successful is really hard because every thing changes very fast and people have to adopt your self with it. To illustrate, people who select a job that they like the can progress in their life because they advocate their time for it. For instance, when a engineer has a problem and can not find a way to solve it, he study and search for a solution and by this way he increases his knowledge and this can help him in his career and.
To make a long story short, based on the aforementioned argument, due to make progress in life and enjoying life, people prefer to choose a more interesting job. Consequently, it is highly recommended that between secure and interesting job, people choose interesting job.
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- In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. 80
- tpo 32 3
- In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own money at a young age. 60
- Old friends vs new friends 60
- TPO 32 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 285, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ieve that people should wait and choose a appealing job. As far as I am concerned...
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Line 2, column 70, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ning is that people can enjoy their life by choosing a pleasing. Nowadays every p...
^^
Line 2, column 308, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... work to finish it without any mistake. it is proven that if a person do not like ...
^^
Line 2, column 715, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...inish it correctly and never get tired. after finishing his work when he arrives home...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 380, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e their time for it. For instance, when a engineer has a problem and can not find...
^
Line 3, column 444, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'studies'.
Suggestion: studies
... and can not find a way to solve it, he study and search for a solution and by this w...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 256, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to interest'.
Suggestion: to interest
...cure and interesting job, people choose interesting job.
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, still, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51595744681 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49254206734 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476063829787 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 543.6 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4721645919 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3333333333 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260113056025 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949530616084 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562767034516 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169698177339 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349239752273 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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