Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nonetheless Celebrities' posters may seem annoying to parents, youngsters from any generation are keen fan of athletes, actors and singers. These public figures with eminent social standing may be heros of teenagers since ones' childhood to the time he or she become busy with work or further responsibilities. Young people will definitely recognize celebrities as essential parts of their life because athletes simply inspire them, they have sufficent time to pursue their favorite celebrities and they can gossip about them among their friends. These reasons are less likely effective among adults.
First and for most, juvenile are more prone to be inspired by their appealing figures compare to older persons. An olympic runner might become a brilliant hero of a 7 years old boy yet not for his father. Younger people, due to their better called delusional desires are better apt to follow an eminent public figure in order to set their goals in common with their favorite celebrities, therby they will go the similar path to become a brand new figure.
Similarly, youngsters have much more time in comparison to their parents or older individuals to spend time on celebrities' lives. For instance, a 14 years old girl has adequate portion of daily time to spend both on her studies for school and also to check her instagram to get a clue of Beyonce's life. She can easily go through her page as to see what is going on with Beyonce's next step for charity affair. In contrast, her mother who works 5 days a week neither have enough time to run her house errands nor doing some exercise let alone pursuing any celebrities' life. Time plays a major role on importance anr prefrence of our interests.
Last but not least, Younger people like to gossip about public figures lives when they hang out with their friends. They simply like to make rumors on their favorite actors lives, and even follow the story much more precisely than any other affair. These interest are less likely to grow among adults. Adults don't seem to be pursuasive on athletes' lives. They rarely care about them and recognize these behaviors rediculous.
In conclusion, although every famous figure will be applauded by their whole nations, no wonder it is to see juvenile as followers of those figures more actively. Famous characters are more important for younger people due to their inspiration need, having more time and having fun by dispersing gossips.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nonetheless,
Nonetheless Celebrities posters may seem annoying t...
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Line 1, column 222, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...tanding may be heros of teenagers since ones childhood to the time he or she become ...
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Line 3, column 555, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'celebrities'' or 'celebrity's'?
Suggestion: celebrities'; celebrity's
...ng some exercise let alone pursuing any celebrities life. Time plays a major role on import...
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Line 4, column 29, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Younger) must be used with a third-person verb: 'peoples'.
Suggestion: peoples
...interests. Last but not least, Younger people like to gossip about public figures liv...
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Line 4, column 309, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ess likely to grow among adults. Adults dont seem to be pursuasive on athletes lives...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, nonetheless, similarly, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2026.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96568627451 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52381486723 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573529411765 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 648.0 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5802432066 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.631578947 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4736842105 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36842105263 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14697538948 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453113848288 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387443973579 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902821553541 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327366831725 0.0645574589148 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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