.The food travels thousands of miles from farm to consumer. Some people think it would be better to our environment and economy if people only ate local produced food. What extent do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
In recent decades, there has been considerable debate regarding the travelling foods from the cities with long distances to reach the consumer. I firmly concur with the opinion that the advantages of the local eating foods would surely outweigh the disadvantages due to the eliminating the transports costs as well as negative impact on the culture of local people.
To begin with, bringing the foods from the cities that are thousands of miles far engenders the increasing costs so that local foods eliminate the transports expenses. From my personal experience, a qualitative analysis was conducted by an eminent sociologist to explore further cars and vehicles. Final results revealed that there is a highly complex relationship between expenses of oils for trucks and human resources and employer payments even though wages and taxes of vehicle should be taken into consideration.Thus, people can be fully informed about sufficient evidence of a causal link between transports costs and bringing the products from other countries.
Furthermore, importing the overseas foods has a negative impact on the local people's culture. For instance, a quantitative research was carried out at the Melbourne University concerning the traditions and customs. Hence, perhaps if the scientific research is significantly correlated with the new commodities and new customs, the preliminary findings will be closely related to both negative impacts on the children and the humankind.
To recapitulate, according to the preceding discussion, I am inclined to the opinion that people can use their local foods for a low price and keep their culture. Moreover, not only should national institutions develop strategies, but also they should formulate them to alleviate the importing of goods.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 518, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well, for instance, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 273.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52014652015 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04318676006 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 139.433497537 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622710622711 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.902870439 50.4703680194 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.7 104.977214359 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3 20.9669160288 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1 7.25397266985 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241657024044 0.242375264174 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900236387517 0.0925447433944 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689824767841 0.071462118173 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134113751028 0.151781067708 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051895040511 0.0609392437508 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 12.6369458128 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 53.1260098522 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 11.5310837438 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.59 8.32886699507 127% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 55.0591133005 176% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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