the idea of having a single career is becoming and old fashioned one. the new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.
Nowadays, a new approach towards career and education is being widespread. The think of having a single job is becoming relatively spoiled, instead, it is more popular to have several careers and also the process of getting qualification is being a continuing one. Investigating the contribution of increasing in living costs to more difficulty in life and also requiring more qualification to be entitled for a job shows this.
These days, it costs a huge amount of money to make a living. For instance an employee with an infinite salary should meet needs of a family including 4 person. It is fairly hard to manage the money. So, it is plausible to have some jobs and benefit from several wages. Moreover, one that could be a replacement for another in hard situations, because job security is low in some companies and you might be redundant any time.
Jobs, also, are being more and more specialized and you have to be educationally qualified and have degrees related to the career in order to be short listed in a job vacancy. The more related major you have studied in university, the more chance you got in passing a job interview. Therefore, it is acceptable to say that people should continue studying to be more up-to-dated educationally. Further education also, can benefit an employee in terms of wages and perks. Take an educated person like an engineer as an example, given his degrees, he or she will be offered better jobs with a better salary.
In summary, considering the difficulty in earning money has made people have several jobs and in order to find a better one or even get promotion in their current job, they should study all the time. I, for one, think this procedure is a beneficial one regarding the motivations it makes for people in their lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...reer and education is being widespread. The think of having a single job is becoming rela...
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Line 2, column 153, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'person' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'people', 'persons'.
Suggestion: people; persons
...ould meet needs of a family including 4 person. It is fairly hard to manage the money....
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, for instance, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78896103896 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80635760833 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2157189675 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29325729121 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101146131778 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852415251587 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179579465905 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763722115023 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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