Technology has been a bane rather than a boon for us.
The formation of earth took millions of years along and from a single cell organsim through mutataion we have reached to being human being and so has our technology. From inventing fire to inventing necular weapons technology has always pushed it's limits. Technology has been a tool human kind has use to be at the of all the living organism present in the chain of evolution. Millions of year ago we use to hunt animals and live in caves. But today things around has compelely changed we have access to all the facilities we need electricity, water , food, communication , internet, medical facilities. But as every coin has two faces so has technology. I firmly beileve that technology has done equal bad as has done good to us.
The goods technology has provided is the reason why our lives are running with much ease. Few decades backs if we need to travel from one place to another it took us several days to cover up the smallest distance but today due to advancement of technology and ever increasing methods of travelling the time take to travel from one country to another has been reduced in a matter of days. The average life expectancy a century back was nearly 50 years but with our advancement of medicial science and medical technolgies we have increased the average life to nearly 65 years. This is only due to advancement in medical science we were able to find the cure of various diseases and thus were able to fight them. Due to improvement in commuincation technology now we can be in contact with any person around the globe, clearly due to technolgical advancement this world has turned into a global village. Thus we can clearly see a boom in technologies in each and every field and all these advancement has lead to more comforts in our lives.
On the opposite scale we have faced several examples where technology was a serious issue in creating haphazard in our lives. During the world war II the tragic incident of bombing two cities of Japan took millions of lives and created a great havoc around the world. Due to necular weapons we are always at risk of ending the whole world if any war strikes again. Also we can see that there have been found serious issues of cyber crimes in which money or property was taken from inncocent people and there lives was disturbed. Along with that in various scientific studies we have found that due to us depending on the technology more and more the general IQ of a person is reducing than that found few decaded ago. Thus we can clearly see that technolgy has it's own demerits too.
Drawing a conculsion of our discussion it will be correct to state that, it is the person on which the good and bad of technolgy depends. Technology has played a vital role in our lives in both good and bad ways but it was never the technology which had it's variations. The human kind is only responsible for the way the use it. Thus I stand by my statement that technology was equal in manupilating our lives for both distress and comfort.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 58.6224719101 136% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2469.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 536.0 442.535393258 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60634328358 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81161862636 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5529162933 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475746268657 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 792.0 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2427877235 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.347826087 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3043478261 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.21951772744 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134379560333 0.243740707755 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421264744073 0.0831039109588 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432674259978 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882124321205 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0121755659514 0.0667264976115 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.