The table below gives the information about rail transport in four countries in 2007.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The table compares about the transport by railways in four countries according to the three criteria in 2007.
Overall, it can be seen that the USA was considerably outstripped by other countries except with respect to loading cargos.
In terms of the number of people using the rail transport, Japanese people topped the list at 27%, compared to the USA at 0.3%, making it the least total. Japan still ranked the number one at 1980 regarding the passenger kilometres per head of the population, much more higher than the USA with 80. Despite being eclipsed, surprisingly the USA was in the first place at 2820, while Japan stood at 23.01 when it came to carrying cargos.
In contrast, both the UK and Italy exhibited almost identical figures in all three measures. The net figure as for the first and third criteria (folks travelling by rails and transferring loads) was 5.9% ( the UK) vs 5.5% (Italy), and 22.2% (the Uk) vs 21.9% (Italy) correspondingly, negligible differences between the two. However, Italy was ultimately just ahead of the UK at 780 vs 770 in passenger kilometres per head of population.
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Essay evaluation report
much more higher than the USA
much higher than the USA
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 10
No. of Words: 188 200
No. of Characters: 883 1000
No. of Different Words: 116 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.703 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.697 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.658 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 53 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 40 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 33 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.538 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.75 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.414 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.735 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.108 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'higher' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: higher
...metres per head of the population, much more higher than the USA with 80. Despite being ecl...
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Line 7, column 202, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...by rails and transferring loads was 5.9% the UK vs 5.5% Italy, and 22.2% the Uk v...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, regarding, still, third, while, as for, in contrast, with respect to, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91489361702 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72942320254 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617021276596 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8084144592 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5 5.23603664747 258% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0836363187723 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460848017292 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790761689094 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.080523559249 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0956581068354 0.0819641961636 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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