It is a highly debatable issue that medical system developments result in higher life expectancy for people but also create negative impacts on their life.
It is a highly debatable issue that medical system developments result in higher life expectancy for people but also create negative impacts on their life. This essay will illustrate the reasons why drawbacks outweigh the advantages regarding to this issue.
First and foremost, in 21st century, mankind has developed an outstanding health care system which brings crucial benefits for citizens around the globe. A strong health care service ensure a healthy and productive society where most of the diseases could be detected and cured in a short time by modern technologies.For instance, the employees and the workers have a high health status and could work for a longer shift. Moreover, with technology developments people's life expectancy become longer is inevitable. Elderly people are like a book of wisdom, experiences and knowledge, lengthen their age could create positive impacts on the society. For example, longer life expectancy could generate extra time for elderly professors to finish their projects or share it with young generations.
However, there are significant disadvantages occur when people age become higher due to technology developments.Firstly, a huge amount of money spent on health care system to keep the elder live longer may cause financial shortage for another major aspects such as education, pollution or disasters. For example, tornado, tsunami or volcano active affect community in many ways and burdens the society. Secondly, population booming is a serious problem which directly affected by longer life expectancy. Our scare resources are running out due to excess population growth, more people means more water, food, medicines and space needed to manage a sufficient life. If no action was taken, the population has gone out of control for a long time.
In conclusion, there are several advantages of lengthen people life expectancy, however the disadvantages are way more serious and needed to take in our account immediately.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 317, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
... in a short time by modern technologies.For instance, the employees and the workers...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Firstly
...e higher due to technology developments.Firstly, a huge amount of money spent on health...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46078431373 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92690984321 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6027798879 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.538461538 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.431941231287 0.244688304435 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15887204336 0.084324248473 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.249399075214 0.0667982634062 373% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280697688859 0.151304729494 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.219859734348 0.056905535591 386% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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