A nation should require all of its students to study same national curriculum until they enter college
Given statement has to be taken positively as same curriculum brings equality in the students as till college students have to learn basics.Although regions,languages or schools are defferent,like in India there are many languages spoken and many different cultures are established,if the syllabus is identical then there will be equality in the children.
Also for government,it will be easy to manage the education system.The nation like china with higher population in the world,they find difficulties in managing different curriculums,maintening records and other stuff even though the syllaus of every other board is quite simmilar.
The good point in this will be the poor and rich students will learn same learings inspite of school differences.We often see that rich people's children goes to high standared schools where fees are huge and poor,middle class parants send there children to the schools which is pocket friendly for them.So even though schools are differents the syllabus student will learn remains same,this will help to cut down so called "Recisom" among poor and rich.
Another will be the great help for the people who travels a lot.Some people deny opportunities of their carrer just because their children are studing in the school and they can't change the school as difference in curriculum.Its very difficult to get admission in another school which is having another structure of syllabus.
So considering all above points,statement given implies a strong positive view.
Students should be learing same syllabus all over nation until they start going to the college.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 2235.4752809 61% => OK
No of words: 249.0 442.535393258 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47791164659 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23589626856 2.79657885939 116% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602409638554 0.4932671777 122% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 704.065955056 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 23.0359550562 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.499899719 60.3974514979 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 227.333333333 118.986275619 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.5 23.4991977007 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192760340247 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118464523692 0.0831039109588 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116818573464 0.0758088955206 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118464523692 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116818573464 0.0667264976115 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.1 14.1392134831 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.4 48.8420337079 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 12.1743820225 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.39 12.1639044944 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.38706741573 117% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 11.8971910112 181% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 11.2143820225 164% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.