With the rise in popularity of the internet, newspapers will soon become a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.)
Nowadays, the popularity of the internet has become a long-runnig dispute among public all around the globe, which leads to a moot question"is it any advantages or not?'. It is a widely held a view that replacing the newspapers by the internet are highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must carefully wiegh up the pros and cons of it.
To begin with, there are several reasons that I support newespapers should have replaced by the Internet. First and foremost is that news from all around the world are eassy access and reachable in convenient any where people would like to read the latest news. In addition, there is little room doubt that the internet are user-friendly as a result of no need to cut trees for pruducing papers.
Furtheremore, needless to say that it is imposible to publish all news in a small space of newspapers. Beside these, many thanks of modern technology such as the smartphone which provide people many kinds of social media to share the last news on it, so by the internet media can share there effairs for individuals globally so this item is imposible for newspaper because newspaper jush produced for local people. fore example, a group of reputable social scientist, working in a prestigious university, conducted longitudinal study to find the relationship between those who read news in newspaper and on the internet. therefore, the result revealed that those who red onnewspapers are three times less aware of the international affairs.
to recapitulate, I entirely believe that although there are several problems on reading news on the internet such as harmful radiation which produced by mobile phone and Wi-Fi, I totally prefer to surf on the network to gain latest news. As every garden may have some weeds.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...urf on the network to gain latest news. As every garden may have some weeds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, may, so, therefore, whereas, in addition, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 297.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99663299663 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83332883199 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 139.433497537 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585858585859 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.0381110612 50.4703680194 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.909090909 104.977214359 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118684875196 0.242375264174 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410595218579 0.0925447433944 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332883184971 0.071462118173 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0696030092315 0.151781067708 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329661633659 0.0609392437508 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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