The 18th century due to industrialization a lot of people migrate to developing countries. This affected lifestyle and increased major problems in developed countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, people’s migration to developed countries has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world, which leads to a moot question “whether the migration threatens the lifestyle of developed countries or not?”. It is a widely held view that immigration to developed areas is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must weigh up carefully the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that immigration to developed countries plays a vital role in the fast-changing world. To put into consideration, I express why I support this idea. First and foremost is that immigrants will be able to find a lucrative job and increase their earning capacity as well as promote the living standard. Secondly, since the developed countries encounter with the crisis of negative population growth, they can compensate their countries for professional workforce. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that immigrants would be the best source of economic growth, so developed countries will be able to increase their earning capacity. A very intangible example to illustrate would be western countries that suffer from lack of skilled worker.
However, there is no doubt that immigration to the developed countries provides people with various negative points. It should be taken into account that overcrowding is one of the most important crises that threaten the developed countries. Moreover, immigrants achieve the best job opportunities, therefore the host country will be deprived from a rewarding job or other facilities.
To recapitulate, I entirely agree that migration to the developed countries in order to share our culture and technology must be taken into consideration. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-12-17 | Rajnikant Chauhan | 11 | view |
- In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have more positive or negative effects on the society? 69
- Mass media like TV, newspaper and radio influence people, particularly young generation. Do you think it works as a pivot to shape the society? What is your opinion? 77
- If you want to study a particular area of climate change, which area/subject will you choose? 11
- Government should reduce their investment in arts, music and painting. Agree or disagree? 11
- Are the cars damaging the environment? Should the number of cars be restricted to one for one family? Give your views and support your views with appropriate examples. 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ation to developed countries has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, in addition, no doubt, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1207.87684729 136% => OK
No of words: 300.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48333333333 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13889400196 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573333333333 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 379.143842365 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4097036026 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.538461538 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.25397266985 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162183431162 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598240129266 0.0925447433944 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459243794228 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10437171322 0.151781067708 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324296921562 0.0609392437508 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.