Write a letter to explaine your idea about iranian economy
Dear sir/ madam
To explain about our economy situation in whole of country, Iran is located in Middle East with powerful energy and economy in history but have faced to big problems such as effect of nuclear and military sanctions and non-effective management, both subjects are explains as following:
Effect of nuclear and military sanction on their business is very tangible and most factories have problems for product and export to overseas markets and so purchase and import raw materials from main seller and producer in the world, but the biggest problems is started from nuclear and military sanctions when all foreign banks and financial institute banded to work with Iranian and so money and finance is main base all business in countries.
In other hand, non-effective management is very usual because more than 90% of their companies and corporations are direct or indirect are relate to government and its amazing to know more than 95% of Tehran stock exchange and trades for governmental brokers and dealer, because of that all corporate governance related to government, they make decision for every policy and labor life in business, they earn money from every meeting and according to Iranian business law they earn 5 to 10 present of annual net income for bones, according to Iranian news agencies many of Iranian managers have family relationship and when Iranian president change they changed, and anybody haven’t academic education in life but can be director in governmental firms.
Tow subjects are very important in now economy, when nuclear and military sanctions are remain any investors couldn’t work and business in Iran and until government control all of economy any business and factories couldn’t have effective business.
You’re faithfully
smrm
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... corporations are direct or indirect are relate to government and its amazing to ...
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Line 6, column 89, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
...when nuclear and military sanctions are remain any investors couldn't work and bu...
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Line 8, column 23, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tive business. You're faithfully smrm
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 5.05154639175 574% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 32.9175257732 27% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 937.175257732 163% => OK
No of words: 285.0 206.0 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35438596491 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76294346147 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 127.690721649 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568421052632 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 290.88556701 167% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6804123711 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 71.0 16.3608247423 434% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 316.534753226 44.8134815571 706% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 381.5 76.5299724578 498% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 71.25 16.8248392259 423% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107698308569 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500174750625 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402210468298 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0569740960054 0.12726935374 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604242499089 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.4 8.37731958763 470% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -9.05 70.7449484536 -13% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 3.82989690722 415% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.2 7.45979381443 432% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.93 8.71597938144 171% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.65 7.59969072165 153% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 41.2886597938 196% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 8.62886597938 672% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.4 8.54432989691 356% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 58.0 8.15463917526 711% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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