Young peoples have attitude and ideas different from their parents and grandparents.
How do these attitudes differ between people and their parents and grandparents.
In your opinion do you think it would cause problems.
Youngsters have attitudes and thinking different of their parents and gaurdians. There are lots of difference youngers between parents and grandparents. I can portray my views on upcoming paragraphs.
There are loads of differences in thinking of youngster between parents and grandparents. Because in past time parents are earn money and they do many efforts and even they do not waste money on expensive things like Branded clothes. In that time the youngsters thinks different, they're doing different to parents thinking they will purchase expensive clothes and waste is the money high scale.
In my opinion, it generate more problems between youngsters and parents. Because the parents do not like some things those are doing by youngsters, because of the parents are doing many of first foreign money and they think the saving of money. What youngsters do not think to save the funds. So that way it's hundred many problems between parents and children is they are loose bonding and do not more attached with their parents.
In conclusion, every people have their own views, I do not deny any of them. But I cogitate is the person going the parents guidelines, daddy percent do not destroy our parents bonding with them. They are happy forever.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 102, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...en parents and grandparents. Because in past time parents are earn money and they do many...
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Line 4, column 124, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'earned'.
Suggestion: earned
...rents. Because in past time parents are earn money and they do many efforts and even...
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Line 4, column 281, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they're
...t time the youngsters thinks different, theyre doing different to parents thinking the...
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Line 6, column 19, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'generates'?
Suggestion: generates
... money high scale. In my opinion, it generate more problems between youngsters and pa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10628019324 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57629729557 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507246376812 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 310.5 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.9047644446 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3076923077 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386498197126 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159838346662 0.084324248473 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112168850639 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257514778694 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654189114525 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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