Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
People earn money to support their life by working. In reality, there are a variety of jobs provided for workers. In my view, workers are more satisfied and happy when they have many different types of tasks to do, for it is more interesting, learning more skills.
Doing the similar tasks all the time makes people bored and less motivated. Workers who are exposed to various jobs and interact with different colleagues can find the happiness and achievement during working. In the past, no matter what kind of job, most people just accepted it and worked hard even if it was the same rultine. In fact, they had no choice but to do that, because the biggest goal for them at that time where lacked of job opportunities was to find a job. However, nowadays, with the blooming of economy, more and more jobs are being offered. Besides, people working not just for money but enjoyment. Therefore, workers are not satisfied with boring job, that is doing similar tasks all day long. On the contrary, they are likely to choose positions with different types of tasks during the workday to acquire happiness and satisfaction.
Furthermore, the job with different tasks cultivates workers potential abilities and allows them to learn more from doing it. As is known to us, different kind of tasks require various demand and abilities. Obviously, it is competitive for people to find a good job in such rapid developing society. One who update his knowledge and gain more skills to fit in the world can he survives and was recognized by others. As a result, people prefer to challenge themselves and find a job with different requirements. For example, my father quit the job as an accountant cause the job tasks are all the same everyday. Recently, he found a job as a accountant manager and he not just deals with basic task like arranging accountants' assangnment but also evaluating the performance of the accountants. During working for only one month, my father has already acquired much information and knowledge about management.
Surely, it is extremely easy to complete the similar tasks and improve working efficiency, while people have more than the demand of substance but the metal demand. Similar tasks bring the borness and lack of improvement, leading to less satisfaction with their jobs. Even though the job with different tasks is far more complex, people can enjoy themselves.
In a word, it is a tendency that workers are more delighted to finish various tasks in workday than to do the same tasks during working.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...s and interact with different colleagues can find the happiness and achievement d...
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...satisfied with boring job, that is doing similar tasks all day long. On the contr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, in fact, kind of, all the same, as a result, in my view, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2103.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9020979021 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65593959606 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48951048951 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 655.2 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5998357184 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4347826087 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.652173913 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95652173913 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329199808683 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104863565338 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11157191089 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23089181961 0.150856017488 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762066429404 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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