It is a foolish idea to get married before finishing the study and settling down. To what extent do you agree to disagree?
Nowadays, early spousal before studies has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the public all over the world, which leads to a moot question “whether getting married before finishing studies is a reasonable decision or not?”. It is a widely held view that graduating before marriage is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must weigh up carefully the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that graduating after marriage plays a vital role in the fast-changing society. Therefore, I express several reasons to support this idea. First and foremost is that they will be able to share their responsibility as well as cover the expenditure of the study. Secondly, not only they can fulfill the sexual needs, but also matrimony gives the couple a sense of self-confidence, well-being, and marriage. In addition to this information, a group of psychologists working at a prestigious university conducted that studying after marriage broaden people’s mind to make the best choice for continuing their education. Also, they will be able to support themselves in both promoting knowledge and financial implications.
However, it is no doubt that early spousal provides people with various points. It should be taken into account that the couples are not able to cover the expenditure of both the university and family. Moreover, the concentration either family management or learning will be excessively hard.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that studying after marriage is so beneficial and this issue must be taken into consideration. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...early spousal before studies has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, in addition, no doubt, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38790035587 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12086455895 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612099644128 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9295613201 50.4703680194 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.461538462 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.25397266985 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.088397105007 0.242375264174 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0236801124036 0.0925447433944 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438313154233 0.071462118173 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0494509336835 0.151781067708 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582412395287 0.0609392437508 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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