Climate change is a huge concern in today’s world. Discuss about the roles that Government, corporates and individuals can play to improve it.
In recent years, there has been a colossal upsurge in environmental concerns, with climate change being a pivotal one. Although convergent efforts from all, be it companies, individuals or governments are required to alleviate this concern, I think it is the government, which has the most important role to play in this regard.
There are a myriad of arguments in favour of my stance. On the one hand, by implementing stringent rules and regulations, the government can ensure that factories and individuals apply environmentally friendly measures in manufacturing goods. On the other, with strict policies and financial penalties in place, manufacturers are more likely to take numerous measures to curb pollution, from applying a range of recycling procedures to disposing of hazardous chemical appropriately. In other words, the more lenience and leeway the government shows, the greater amount of pollution is. Needless to say, all these merits stand the government in good stead, when it comes to shaking off this soaring.
Another pivotal argument is that unlike other bodies, with a deluge of resources and legitimate power to fight off climate change, the government is the strongest of all to do everything it takes to address this concern, such as raising awareness through a variety of campaigns, enforcing stringent rules and the like. Hence, it is apparent why instead of others, I am focusing on the government.
From what has been discussed, one can conclude that the role played by the government in escalating the concerns of climate change is instrumental indeed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 13, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, so, i think, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29365079365 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05352437127 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 3.65517241379 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.1841952734 50.4703680194 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.4 104.977214359 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 20.9669160288 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 7.25397266985 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154009721848 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593381934644 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070011477385 0.071462118173 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118432854684 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787366126011 0.0609392437508 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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