Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Parent plays a significant role for their children specially in making decisions. however, some are of the opinion that this role has been changed considerably nowadays in comparison with past, while others believe otherwise. I- for one- subscribe to the latter idea on the ground that today's life has been changed in many aspects, namely information, job finding, and culture.
To begin with, having information is vital for making a wise decision. While in the past getting information was restricted to the surrounding people, especially family, today data can be accessed widely by using many source of information like internet, books, university education, to name but a few. That being so, young people can be more informative and are less dependent to their families to make decisions.
Secondly, in the past there was not many choices of getting jobs and children usually followed their fathers' jobs so, one of the most important decision of their life was determined by their parents. But, today people have a various option of occupations to choose among them for their future. There for they usually pursue their interests and are independent from their parents.
The last but not the least reason that reinforces the preceding assertion that young people are less dependent on their families these days, is associated with the culture. In the past, there were some strict rules of tradition that limited the people's behavior and their options. For example, they in my country young girls were compelled to marry in their very young ages. But these days people can more freely make decisions for their life. Therefore, parents have less impact in their decision making.
All in all, I do believe that nowadays young people have more independency than they had in the past because, they now have more available information, more job to choose, and also more freedom. Who can reject these incontrovertible distinguishing differences of modern young people with their ancestors?
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...children specially in making decisions. however, some are of the opinion that this role...
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Line 1, column 287, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...e to the latter idea on the ground that todays life has been changed in many aspects, ...
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Line 2, column 213, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun source seems to be countable; consider using: 'many sources'.
Suggestion: many sources
...ay data can be accessed widely by using many source of information like internet, books, un...
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Line 4, column 245, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...ict rules of tradition that limited the peoples behavior and their options. For example...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19254658385 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67238145155 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540372670807 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8355190787 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373813611844 0.236089414692 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13829286784 0.076458572812 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637242203733 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20553838797 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887767814347 0.0645574589148 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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