Describe a way of relaxing that you consider particularly effective and explain why relaxation is thought to be so important in today’s world
Destressing is essential now a days since everyone running for their machine life. There are many methods to loosen up our stresses and the inevitable problems. Absolutely we couldn't disagree with that.
We wake up in the morning, we fresh up and do the morning duties. After that check in on time in the office by the travel and contineously working for morethan nine hours per day without any breaks for chill out. Unsurprisingly these routine stuffs are really lead to several diseases or harmful for health.
One recent study says "for some people, depression may actually be an allergic reaction to stress". Sadly this may increase the fatigue, distorted appitite and lead to other symtoms of illness assosiated with the depression. People need to be exploited the real reasons behind these truths and from that look forward to the remedies.
There are several causes such as work load, family problems and Economical predicament to live, are basically catacombs of the health complications. Utterly, people should do something with the relaxations instead of stuck up with the problems that everyday brings.
We should spend our leiture time with entertainment such as listening to songs, watching movies, and perhaps reading books or whatever we love to do in order to get the rid of these troubles. Meditations, light exercise and simply lying arealso well known remedies for that.
Most of the people do yoga with meditation to cut loose from the depressions, stresses and brain damages. Obviously this method is very effective since the other ways get in to work eventually.
research exihibits watching movies or TV and listening to music are the other significant way to mend our minds from the contineous mental injuries.
Finally, I recapitulate that keeping our health by spending time with relaxations in order to exclude the health issues is as predominant as work hard to make money in the current world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, finally, if, look, may, really, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14556962025 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75425556733 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613924050633 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8040181589 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6470588235 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5882352941 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82352941176 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0746376291804 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0217323077311 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324226805536 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0342762282214 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304303978235 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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