You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.
Write a letter to your manager.
In your letter
-explain why want to take time off work
-give details of the amount of time you need
-suggest how you work could be covered while you are away
Dear Tom,
I am writing this letter to request you to allow me to take some time off from the work.
As you are aware that I have been continuously working without break for last two months and got exhausted. Moreover my nephew wedding is planned in next week. Therefore, I am planning to take few weeks off from work. I believe that during holidays, I will get chance to take some rest and of course meet all my family members in wedding which will certainly help me to rejuvenate myself.
I will take two weeks off starting from 15th Aug’18 to 30th Aug’18 and during these period office will open only on 6 days because extended weekends falling in between these dates.
In order to cover my roles and responsibilities, I have already made agree Mrs Lorna who closely work with me and have full idea about my work activities. I shall be available on phone in case of any assistance.
I request you to grant me a leave for above mentioned period.
Yours faithfully
Sandy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Tom, I am writing this letter to...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Tom, I am writing this letter to request you ...
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Line 4, column 108, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... for last two months and got exhausted. Moreover my nephew wedding is planned in...
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Line 4, column 110, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...or last two months and got exhausted. Moreover my nephew wedding is planned in next we...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, therefore, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 819.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62711864407 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57565162537 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3249482282 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255227537976 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1002480253 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0968687078512 0.0603063233224 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147570012278 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121612671733 0.0580467560999 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.