Some people believe that women should play equal role to men in country's police force and military force, such as army. Others say that women are not suitable for this job.
discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some argue that females should be given equal responsibilities as males in nation's defence forces, while others say that females are not capable of doing these jobs. Although girls are outperforming boys in various arenas of life, I believe boys can perform better in such roles because they have the more physical strength that is much needed for such jobs.
It is true that females are doing better than males in many fields and can do it in defence field as well. This is to say that girls are outperforming boys in studies and getting better jobs than them. As a result, they are capable of doing training and related studies, and could wisely implement the strategies in the war zone. For example, a recent study by Oxford University revealed that 82% of University toppers are girls and 64% want to opt for a job Navy or Air Force. Despite this, I believe females are not physically strong that is the main requirement for such jobs.
On the other hand, males have the more physical endurance that is the most needed skill to perform such roles. Protecting the nation from criminals and terrorists requires the soldiers to perform duty throughout the day and night. This required them to stay in harsh climate conditions, such as standing for long hours in -50°c, which means the person should be physically strong to bear the appalling conditions. For instance, the Indian soldiers on Indo-China border have to stay in -43°c for 2 to 3 month and they hardly get any good food and medical supplies during that period. I believe, males have better physical power to resist difficult conditions faced during such jobs.
To conclude, while women are leading many professions, I believe men are more suitable for defence forces duty because they are stronger than women and can bear difficulties to the greater extent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 503, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...border have to stay in -43°c for 2 to 3 month and they hardly get any good food and m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87179487179 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50213583977 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535256410256 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4354012128 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.923076923 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196264011402 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670121181164 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530749054532 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129799217297 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393926433983 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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