Some people want their country to host international sports events while others believe that it brings more problems than benefits. Discuss and give your own opinions?
Dreams are instrumental to know the real meaning of life. Whereas, few people demand that their own country organise some international sports event. While others assert that it leads more problems rather than benefits. Here, l would like to discuss both views in up coming paragraphs and share my own opinion.
There are manifold points to shore up my views first and foremost, It helps them to boost the economy of their country by organising international sports events. For example, people and players visit from others country to take part in the sports or watching it. So that They have to spend money on buying tickets and can do some recreational activities. In result, It is fruitful for the country to increase their economic level. Moreover, It uplift the standard of the country. Because, if they host sports events they can show their hospitality in front of others and also sportsman awarded by huge prizes by winning the sports in any field. As a result, It may feel proud to the every person of that country. Furthermore, It also give optimum opportunity to make relationship strong with other countries. To examplify, it is beneficial for them to help in every thick and thin situation related to different type of matters. In result, it play magnificent role to make their bonding strong.
Shifting attention to negative side, The biggest menance is the investment on other things by organising sports events. For example, The administration have to invest on medical and provide proper facilities to players. In the result, The rampant use of money on sports is detrimental for any country. Last but not least, players or people from other country. Because the biggest threat is related to their communication with others and traffic problem and many more. As a result, It ruin the mind of people and create disturbance in their life.
To conclude, It is widely accepted that every coin has two espects. But I believe that it is good step to organise sports events. Because, it helps the players to fulfill their big desires.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, whereas, while, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95362318841 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6450541959 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542028985507 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1632608688 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3043478261 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08695652174 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348079309842 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827959861204 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850532013233 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207165115917 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119743954127 0.056905535591 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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