Nowadays people buy a lot of things even though they donot really need them
Lifestyle has undergone dramatic change over a couple of decades. Presently , the tendency of buying new goods are gaining prevalence. So,people buy things which are unnecessary. Hence, it supposed to be perilous. Here,i would accounts for this happening and its results.
There are manifold causes of happening this. Fisrt and foremost, it is the era of competitive.several companies compete to each other. So, they are providing concession on consumer goods.People are be allured by them and buy products which are useless.Taking a real example into consideration,people but set of soaps even they do not require all.Morover,theses days products are advertising by film stars or favourite celebrity and packing of goods are excellent which allure to people and compel to buy unnecessary goods.Next,people buy innovative products for show-off. To justify, living standard of people are uplift.so,folks buy products for elevating personality in society. Thus , such tendency compel people to buy goods.
This trend is perilous for society.To commence with, tendency of buying more and more products make people to spendthrift.Thus , they have to work more than their stipulated hours which can the cause of destructive maladies.Im addition , using things the excessive amount cna be cause the consumerism.To justify ,people buy innovative products and through the old ones which can contaminate the environment. Therefore, this trends has too many cons.
To conclude, this happening has negative results, even we can not be totally eliminated from society it can be rampant upto some extent if we serious regar dthis happening.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58704453441 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40176991272 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635627530364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 131.893582709 49.4020404114 267% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 106.153846154 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209414930475 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653495625003 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784290040354 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11516847796 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656237799446 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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