Some people believe that a person’s intelligence is inherited from the parents, while others believe that their environment is the main factor. Discuss these views. Which factor do you think is mostly responsible for intelligence?
It’s still widely debated topic whether cognitive abilities depend on genetics or environment is a big factor of developing intelligence. There are arguments supporting the both sides that I will consider briefly throughout this essay.
On the one hand, according to genetics, most of the features of parents are inherited by children. In genetics theory, the cognitive abilities of children are inherited especially from their mother. Apparently, mothers play a key role in developing intelligence of fetus, as pregnancy period of mother is the start of growing mentality in a kid. For example, if intelligent mother previously spent her time on reading during her leisure time, without any negative destructions as bad habits, there is more probability that her embrion will be born with ameliorated cognitive abilities.
Conversely, supporters of the social sciences believe that an intelligence is a soft skill that can be advanced depending on society and living conditions. In urban areas, city dwellers face complex issues that are intended to be solved on a daily basis rather than in countryside. For instance, city dwellers face challenges as contaminations, congestions; time scheduling that enables them to solve complex issues that directly involve intelligence level. Furthermore, intelligence level depends on education background whether a person possess high school education in combination with advanced studies as bachelor or other degrees. Hence, the more person invested its time on education, learning new languages, the more intelligent he seems to become in the future.
Overall, I believe environmental factors oversights genetics factors as more opportunities are available to master the intelligence but it is also crucial for mother to preserve.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'intelligence'.
Suggestion: intelligence
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, briefly, but, conversely, furthermore, hence, if, so, still, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67910447761 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14849322359 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638059701493 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8789836046 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.833333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217091559626 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723178330415 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545989341698 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129938109494 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054883582413 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.32 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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