Some people spend too much time on work than their personal/private life and experience time shortage. What problems does it cause.
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge in the trend by the prodigies discussing the influence of excessive time spent by the people at work places. Some people think that spending too much time at office area results in lack of time and disruption of personal life, while others maintain that owing to increasing demand of employers its better to spend maximum time at work place. This essay will discuss that how spending excessive time at office results in shortage of time and hampers the personal lives.
At the outset, there are myriad of arguments associated with the odds of spending too much time at office. The most conspicuous is that employers over burden their employees with excessive tasks. As a result, employees with the fear of getting fired work day in and day out to meet the demands of their bosses. As a matter of fact, it is evident that high demands by the employers overdose employees and result in lack and shortage of time.
On the other hand, people involved in high demanding sectors need to prioritize their official commitments. Firstly, employees need to concentrate on their respective tasks and should not waste time during office timings. This would not only increase their productivity and efficiency but also allow to create more free time slot. For instance, people employed in job sectors like police, military and air traffic controlling need to prioritize their requirements to lead a healthy life. Hence, by adhering to good management rules more time slots for personal life can be created.
To recapitulate, foregoing discussion propounds that the excessive tasks loaded by employees can be managed by prioritization and following good management principles which would entail in more leisure time in personal life of an individual.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 301, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'creating'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: creating
...ductivity and efficiency but also allow to create more free time slot. For instance, peop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, so, while, for instance, in short, as a matter of fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 31.9359605911 166% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 293.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14675767918 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68974028339 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546075085324 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 461.7 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9899901213 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.25397266985 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330351862125 0.242375264174 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12096151419 0.0925447433944 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779646954143 0.071462118173 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19229759781 0.151781067708 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0901825482768 0.0609392437508 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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