You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter
introduce yourself
explain what is wrong with the furniture
say what action you would like the landlord to take
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Sanjay Yemula, one of your tenants, and writing this to complain about some of the furniture in our apartment. It would be better if they are replaced.
To explain more about the damaged furniture, the sofa and the laptop table are actually a bit damaged. One of the supporting legs of the couch is actually broken and it is losing the balance when we sit on it. In addition to this, the desk which is in the living room is also having a crack in the middle and we are afraid that it may break at any time. This is the major concern that I have regarding the furniture.
I would be glad if this damaged furniture is replaced with the ones in good condition, and it would be better if you arrange a new table and sofa. I hope you would consider my request as it is causing so much inconvenience for us when we have guests visiting us.
Thank you so much for your time, and I would be happy to hear a response from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Sanjay Y
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...nts, and writing this to complain about some of the furniture in our apartment. It would be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, may, regarding, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30481283422 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38217138015 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582887700535 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3832451685 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15678590704 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620129671222 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630030807564 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975863466605 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506851895208 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.