Some people think that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city. Discuss both views and gives your opinion
People have different views about whether living in a horizontal or vertical city is superior to the other. While there are some benefits to residents who dwell in a city which consists of low-rise buildings, I think it is more advantageous for ones who live in cities with skyscrapers and high-rise construction.
On the one hand, a horizontal city can provide some benefits to the people in some aspects. Firstly, people who choose to live in a city with predominant low-rise construction have more chances to achieve a better quality of life. Because the population density is not too high, everyone can have a private house with enough space for each individual’s hobby such as gardening, swimming or painting. Secondly, living lower to the ground can be safer for inhabitants. For example, when a jeopardizing situation such as an occurrence of fire take place, people will have enough time to escape from dangerous areas as they do not live too high off the ground.
On the other hand, I do believe that living in a vertical city is the best choice. A city with a lot of skyscrapers will have more space for public usage because there will be less land used for residential areas due to the amount of people who can live in high buildings. As a results, government can use this land to build new schools, stores, malls and hospitals that provide enough basic needs for the residents. Moreover, modernization rate is much more higher in other places which provide a lot of opportunities in job and education. For example, a student whose major is marketing can apply a job to a variety of companies throughout the city and have more selections since the development in services always requires a sufficient amount of staff.
In conclusion, although living in a horizontal city can be a great selection, it seems to me that the advantages of life in a city with skyscrapers makes living in a vertical city a better choice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a result' or simply 'results'?
Suggestion: a result; results
...ople who can live in high buildings. As a results, government can use this land to build ...
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Line 3, column 455, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'higher' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: higher
...s. Moreover, modernization rate is much more higher in other places which provide a lot of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81081081081 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88243239724 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501501501502 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.556926879 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.230769231 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6153846154 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8461538462 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238129923731 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104897268533 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942721542564 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178224938156 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800026040936 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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