Many people like to wear fashionable clothes.
Why do you think this is the case?
Is this a good thing or a bad thing?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write not less than 250 words
Nowadays, majority of individuals desire to wear trending and latest designer clothes even though, most of the time are expensive, such a trend is as a result of pressure from advertising companies and people want to look like their role models. I personally believe this has adverse effects to the society and the masses most especially the youths.
Firstly, advertisements from commercial companies are the main cause of people willing to acquire fashionable dresses. In other words, commercials always raise the quality and value of products even though, it might be sub-standard. Fashion companies have the strategy of discounting trending attires, thereby, exerting pressure on consumers most especially, youths to purchase their products. For instance, H and M clothing line in Bremen, always have sales when new products are introduced to the market.
Secondly, most people copy the dressing code of their idols in the entertainment industry. This is especially true among the youths who can go to any length just to dress like their favourite musician or actor. For instance, seventy-percent of teenage girls in the United States wore similar dress as female celebrities around the globe during their first prom night.
In my opinion, I think the development has a detrimental effect on individuals especially youths as well as society as a whole. The rate of consumerism has grown considerably. That is to say, majority of adolescence squander quite a sum of money just to purchase designers and brand clothes consequentially, indebting themselves. Hence, they are unable to cater for their medical and dental expenditure. Furthermore, people looks indifferent and therefore, no uniqueness in society. Finally, it damages cultures and traditions as future generations no longer uphold unto it.
In conclusion, commercials from advertising companies play a crucial role for people to desire fashionable dresses which have drawbacks both on individuals and the community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51307189542 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09746864661 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604575163399 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0502018861 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.4375 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.625 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103985199769 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0318377912843 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027668342508 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0604221725598 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180164343901 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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