The line graph show that the rate of birth and death in european country from 1950to 2050?.
The line graph demonstrates information about rate of birth and death in europe over a period of 100 years.
Overall, it can be clearly seen that maximum birth rate was in 1970 while the death rate remained stable in 80 years.
The most striking point to be observed that in 1950, almost 800000 babies born. However, in next 20 years, it increased gradually with 100000. After that in 1990 the birth rate dropped significantly with 600000. Moreover, it rose steadily with 700000 in 2010. In contrast, it can be seen that from 2010 to 2050, the birth rate constant stable approximately 100000.
Movingfurther, the death rate in European country was lowest compared to the birth rate. Furthermore, from 1950 to 2030 , the death rate unchanged nearly700000. Lastly, in 2050, the death rate slightly increased with 800000.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, lastly, moreover, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 691.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 136.0 196.424390244 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08088235294 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.41495297035 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68509977017 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595588235294 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 177.3 283.868780488 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.459030733 43.030603864 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.1 112.824112599 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6 22.9334400587 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388924606158 0.215688989381 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150690903855 0.103423049105 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11644618584 0.0843802449381 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243844850189 0.15604864568 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10744685356 0.0819641961636 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 61.2550243902 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.3012195122 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.