A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter• give contact details for when you are away• give instructions about how to care for your pet• describe other household dutie

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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• give contact details for when you are away
• give instructions about how to care for your pet
• describe other household duties

Dear Mary,

Hope you are doing well. I am doing good, though it is quite hectic at this moment, as you know, i am leaving to singapore for summer vacation from this coming tuesday to next tuesday.

First of all, thank you very much for accepting my request to take care of my house and suzane while i am away. I just want want to make things easy by providing some instructions upfront. I will be carrying mobile with me to vacation, so you can call or message me at 480-345-6734 whenever required. I prefer texting rather than calls. Coming to suzane, I will be arranging all his required items like food, bed and water in the cabin, which is present in the lawn area. Everyday serve him a bowl of milk as breakfast and a cup of pedigree as dinner. He skips lunch so you are least bothered to worry about that. Smith will be coming to take suzane for evening walk everyday.

Apart from these, I require one more help from you. Refrigerator is not working properly. As a result, items are getting spoiled. I have complained to my landlord regarding it last week. He agreed to arrange me a new one this coming thursday. So I request you to keep the new refrigerator in your home, i will pick it up after coming from the vacation. Thank you once again for the help.

Best wishes,
Divya

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mary, Hope you are doing well. I am doing good...
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Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ite hectic at this moment, as you know, i am leaving to singapore for summer vaca...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...this coming tuesday to next tuesday. First of all, thank you very much for ac...
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Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... take care of my house and suzane while i am away. I just want want to make thing...
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Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: want
...ouse and suzane while i am away. I just want want to make things easy by providing some i...
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Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e me at 480-345-6734 whenever required. I prefer texting rather than calls. Comin...
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Line 5, column 674, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... coming to take suzane for evening walk everyday. Apart from these, I require...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ke suzane for evening walk everyday. Apart from these, I require one more hel...
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Line 7, column 312, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...keep the new refrigerator in your home, i will pick it up after coming from the v...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, regarding, so, well, while, apart from, you know, as a result, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44769874477 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38963055781 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640167364017 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8874633163 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.0555555556 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2777777778 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153559098314 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404135719035 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462645570312 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098325626485 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229939530228 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.64 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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