Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
You should write at least 250 words
In this modern era, the international globetrotter has become a biggest industry in all over the world and this trend is escalating dramatically in these days but the several kind of problems are created by it as compare with the understanding between folks from divergent cultures.I fully disagree with the given statement and this essay will analyze the opposite view points in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, international tourism has a huge number of positive impacts on the native people of other nation due to varied speaking skills as well as culture traditions and rituals. Firstly, in this time period an every person has a curiosity to learn about several languages to enhance their knowledge for being a successful in specific field of work.Secondly, native masses get a chance to meet a tourist people face to face for getting a knowledge about their nation culture and history.
Furthermore, the life style amendments are possible in the country due to the visiting of tourist people because people get to know about their way of negotiation as well as dressing sense.As a result, the formidable concerns can be made very easily with the help of tourism.Moreover,native people get benefit from the tourists because they stay for a long time in country and spent a money for buying traditional products as well as pay for accommodation.
To conclude, International tourism is the best way to learn about other culture in this modern time period and people can enhance their knowledge with the help of visiting various places .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, kind of, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11811023622 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01923603517 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551181102362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.2975951904 246% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.456109925 49.4020404114 222% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 260.0 106.682146367 244% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.8 20.7667163134 245% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.6 7.06120827912 348% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203724681255 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119691600066 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713697584164 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132863724986 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649557305378 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.1 13.0946893788 215% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 20.73 50.2224549098 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 11.3001002004 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.1190380762 217% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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