Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this contemporary and competitive world, everyone has various goals to achieve in life. These goals may be short term or long term. To make our goals successful we need proper planning and organization. Hence, I do agree with the statement that it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. However, my viewpoint can be best understood after a meticulous discussion of the points relating to the statement.
First of all, it provides us right direction to move towards our goal, thus proliferates the chances to achieve goal. As per the saying goes "plan out your work and work out your plan". Efficient planning helps us in many ways such as time management, identify our areas of improvement, maintain discipline and consistency in the whole journey. For instance, when I was preparing for the medical entrance exam in my country. I strategically planned my whole preparation journey and followed it very strictly, which lead me to achieve a higher rank in the exam.
Secondly, it helps to overcome procrastination, which is the main reason people often struggle with. In this world of technology, people are becoming lazy day by day as they do not have to do much efforts for their daily routine work. To overcome laziness, best way is to have a firm plan. Therefore, to have skills of preparing plans and managing things are of utmost significance. For example, few years back, I wanted to loose my weight, for that initially I was very lazy to go gym and do the workout exercises. Then one day I happened to watch a video on internet about loosing weight. After watching that video I made an effective plan and set the target of two months to loose weight. I followed this without being lazy and got the desired results.
Above all, some may say that ability to plan and organize is not that important as success can also be achieved by hardwork. However, doing hardwork correctly and in right direction matters and makes your journey easy amd optimistic.
In conclusion, taking what I mentioned above into consideration, I strongly believe that it is very essential to have ability if planning and organizing.
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- TPO-48 - Integrated Writing Task 71
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in many ways such as time management, identify our areas of improvement, maintain discipline
in many ways such as managing time, identifying our areas of improvement, maintaining discipline
I wanted to loose my weight
I wanted to lose my weight
about loosing weight.
about losing weight.
to loose weight.
to lose weight.
I strongly believe that it is very essential to have ability if planning and organizing.
I strongly believe that it is very essential to have ability by planning and organizing.
Sentence: Above all, some may say that ability to plan and organize is not that important as success can also be achieved by hardwork.
Error: hardwork Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: However, doing hardwork correctly and in right direction matters and makes your journey easy amd optimistic.
Error: hardwork Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: amd Suggestion: am
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flaws:
sentences are relatively short. and some verbs are repeatedly used, like: it helps...
need to read more essays, articles, magazines to improve vocabulary words.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 20 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 368 350
No. of Characters: 1732 1500
No. of Different Words: 207 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.38 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.707 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.677 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 113 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 95 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 67 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 38 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.524 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.288 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.619 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.277 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.492 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.08 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 193, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...zy day by day as they do not have to do much efforts for their daily routine work. T...
^^^^
Line 6, column 256, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the best'.
Suggestion: , the best
...daily routine work. To overcome laziness, best way is to have a firm plan. Therefore, ...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 425, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...or example, few years back, I wanted to loose my weight, for that initially I was ver...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 679, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[3]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...lan and set the target of two months to loose weight. I followed this without being l...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90217391304 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83134439902 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584239130435 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1013266117 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9047619048 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5238095238 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95238095238 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285084448934 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795199947715 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100154637275 0.0737576698707 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147031251466 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480628459692 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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