Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both school and parents are responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
During recent years, the lifestyle of people has been changed dramatically which is more obvious between children. By a brief research and compression between old people and children, it can be observed that the main features way of life are totally different. Either school or parents are responsible for these diversities. However, these factors are influenced by a collection of reasons same as society situation, economic condition, cultural situation and also social media as well. The way how these items can affect children lifestyle is discussed by following paragraph.
The most important thing is about unhealthy diet of children. Unfortunately the amount of usage of fast food is increased rapidly. Since nowadays, both parent have to work hours outside, they don’t have enough time to go shopping or cooking. Another thing is that most of the junk foods are tastier because of their amount of spices, salt and oil. So, they have become the first choice of most of the either old or young people. While in the past, homemade food were served for main dishes. Parents used to pay close attention on children diets and they would place an emphesise on nutrition habits of their children. They cared more about the quality of ingredient and spent more time on shopping.
Another thing is how often children do exercise during the weeks that is related at first to school and then to parents. As children would spend most of their time at school, it’s clear that there would be the best place for doing activities. In order to make children do exercise, there should be lots of amazing sport programs in schools. Attending in group games or team matches, in addition to doing activity, would be effective in earn confidence and loving their bodies. Also, parent should spend more time with children to have some outside activities.
These days and by the past of several decades of development social media, they became one of the most important part of people life. By introducing various entertainment program, people, especially children, used to spend more time in front of TV or computers or just browsing in their phone. So it’s clear that amount of activities decreased which result in rising risk of diseases same as heart diseases, or heart attack. The result of researches has been shown that children prefer to do a computer game whether go to the gym and do some exercise. Also, they sleep late at night because of addiction to those games.
In conclusion, there are different items that have strong impact on people lifestyle. Unhealthy habits such as fast food, not doing exercise, dinking soda and sleeping late at night are some of them. Parent and school are most and first responsible of popularity these habits. Family and school attemption need to be done to solve these unhealthy and destructive habits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, then, well, while, another thing, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 41.998997996 174% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2387.0 1615.20841683 148% => OK
No of words: 474.0 315.596192385 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0358649789 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56847074397 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514767932489 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 731.7 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.763033018 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4074074074 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227572562163 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642865224897 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574781760748 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13095792529 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445930249335 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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