should the people pay taxes out of the money they earn.do you agree or disagree.
"Government's first duty is to take care of people not to run their lives". In the current time of technological advancement , one of thd most pressing concerns is regarding given topic that whether the citizens should pay tax to the state out of their earned money or not. I completely disagree with the statement and ahall explore the same from various aspects in the following paragraphs.
Government of any province is of the people , for the people and by the people. I strongly believe that people should pay proper taxes to the state. taxes collected from the general public is the main source of income for the government to generate payments for establishment of infrastructure , education centres , free government hospitals and for raising many more fields like defence and transportation. It is true that the money collected in the form of taxes help to maintain infrastructure and many significant buildings.Taxes play a pivotal role in the establishment of health facilities in the state , for instance the treatment given to the people who are below the poverty line is almost free of cost qhich is very useful for them. i would like to bolster my perspective by saying that the government hospitals in india are running with the assistance and support of general public in the form of taxes they pay to the government.
In addition to this taxes payed by the general public raises the schools and many educative centres in the province. for instance, in the USA country the living expenses of a person who payed taxes in his lifetime is beared by the government when he gets old and gets out of work. Moreover the taxes are highly useful for the smooth running of defence departmet of the country. Above all this the most substantial advantage of paying taxes is the pension schemes which a person gets in the form of feedback when he gets retired and goes out of work. for instance, in India a person gets pension schemes when he gets retired and is unemployed. The significant benefit of paying of taxes lies in overall development of the nation including economical , cultura and financial.
As we have seen that there are number of benefits of paying taxes i tend to believe that paying taxes to the government are very beneficial for the development of the people and nation at the same time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, regarding, so, for instance, in addition, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1932.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87878787879 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85074192736 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457070707071 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.8504098974 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.8 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25767910483 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987730565309 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724621563793 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165471349451 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0189539618228 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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