Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others, however, believe that these problems cannot be solved if individuals do not take actions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There different opinions in regard to the question of whether each person needs to act for solving environmental issues or not. The debates over this topic seems to consist of two irreconcilable camps. In this essay both sides of argument will be analyzed before a logical conclusion is drawn and my personal opinion is given.
On the one hand, environmental problems have global effect, therefore, governments should rise these questions and look for different solutions. For example, one of the hot issues is pollution in metropolises. The value of carbon dioxide is so huge, thus, a great number of people have problem with health, such as cancer or lungs disease. To solve particular this issue, a government should develop public transportation or motivate citizens to use other green vehicles, such as bicycles.
On the other hand, every individual has opportunity to reduce environmental problems and makes our world cleaner. For instance, a wasting is one of the global difficulties, but each person is counted here, therefore if we collect and separate rubbish properly, it will dramatically improve a waste material recycling process and reduce tons of non-recycling products.
In conclusion, there are merits of both sides of the argument. However, after analyzing all camps, my personal view is that every person should take care of environmental problems. Because it is difficult to see in daily routine, but our small steps can improve and make a live better. Given this situation, it seems that environmental issues are a calling topic and everybody should be involved to make our living place safer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 39, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
There different opinions in regard to the question of whether each person needs to act for solving en...
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Line 1, column 301, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...re a logical conclusion is drawn and my personal opinion is given. On the one hand, environment...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22692307692 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9444838609 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623076923077 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8983541428 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.538461538 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176510229825 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587334471733 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448538952654 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974299184962 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127706914872 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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