The bar chart below shows the results of survey conducted by a personal department at a major company. The survey was carried out on 2 groups of workers: those aged from 18-30 and those aged 45-60,and shows factors affecting their work performance.
The horizontal graph indicate the survey on two different age groups on the factors contributing to make their environment pleasant for walking.
To begin with, the external factors affecting work performance on chance for personal development was highest, who aged from 18-30 year and it was 40 percent prospects, who aged 45-60 years old. In the case of promotion prospects, the external factors affecting work performance 80 percent and 50 percent respectively. When it comes to money, the external factors affecting work performance was almost same in two different age groups.
Movingfurther, the internal factors affecting work performance on team spirit was constant on two different age groups. Whereas, the internal factors on relax working environment was 80 percent, who aged from 18-30 year and it was 30 percent, who aged from 45-60 years old. The internal factors on competent boss was almost same in both age groups. The internal factors on job security was 20 percent and 40 percent in both age groups respectively. Interestingly, the internal factors on job satisfies and work environment was constant in both age groups.
Overall, it is evident that the internal have similar responses from two age groups while they have dissimilar responses on the external factor.
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- Some people think that several short holidays from school are better, while others think one long summer holiday for the year is better for children. Discuss and include your own opinion. 73
- In many countries woman no longer the need to get married. Some people think that this is because woman are able to earn more income and do not require security a man for being. What extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- To recent year, there is an on going debate. Whether by completing further study in universities or by joining workload directly. My essay will shed a light on both views in upcoming paragraphs. 11
- Some people believe that should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. Do agree or disagree? 67
- The table below gives information about favourite pastimes in different countries in percentage. 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, whereas, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1084.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3137254902 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88293644887 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.416666666667 0.547539520022 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 316.8 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5873392358 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.4 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28502811486 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143053635571 0.103423049105 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538649843213 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177808805981 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567107585042 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.