Some people are beieve that family members os important than friends.Do you agree or disagree?
In fact family play vital role in human being life also,for animals.The member of family is influnce on each other. There few masses are think that the tribe is necessary part of life than the colleagues.However,I am fully agree with the statement and I will delve my point of views in my upcomming pharagraphs.
To commence with,there are various perspectives about family.It is first stage of life due to blood connection among parents and children.since parents give birth to us.
Probing further,parents are well supported for infants.They are always be helpfull in their life as well.
To conclude,both are important however in my opinion people should never forget kindness of their foster parents.In my an experince,nowadays yongsters are doing evil behavior with elder humans they do not give respect to them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, well, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 696.0 1615.20841683 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 131.0 315.596192385 42% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31297709924 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38312328216 4.20363070211 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32304026236 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 176.041082164 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.748091603053 0.561755894193 133% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 506.74238477 42% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.520533101 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.2 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120187269868 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545600115984 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477424495353 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0555717708338 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557193792335 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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